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Dear victims (please read),
Sometimes they just don’t believe
That what they’re doing to you
Could leave scars beneath your sleeve
A wound within your heart
A broken dream upon your mind
A tear fallen out of innocent eyes
A tragedy on rewind.
But, please don’t give up on this…
This battle fought inside
This war where you are left tied up
While they shoot you with lies.
Please, you know they’re the ones
That will never make it through
The reality of this world,
By hurting people like you.
Please, don’t give up,
Just keep fighting this battle within
And remember, while you may be the victim…
The victim always wins.
If you guys are wondering what i meant by "a victim always wins"...
I meant that, in fairytales and things like that, the people who are victims of the bad guys (i feel childish saying that, but y'know, whatever haha) always win.
Does that make sense? I dunno. I'm sorry if it doesn't D:

DEAR VICTIMS.
NEVER think you are less than anyone. NEVER hate who you are, what you look like, and NEVER give up.
YOU. ARE. WORTH. EVERYTHING. <3


I love you guys.

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:iconwolfartmaster:
wolfartmaster Featured By Owner 11 hours ago  Hobbyist Artist
very true
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Tenshi-no-hane-Okami Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes it's hard to remember that... Thanks for reminding me.   ^^
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CrystalChell Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh man, I'm crying a rainstorm x'D
This is great. <:')
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Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful.
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gdunde Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student General Artist
if only that were true
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Hawk-tip Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Around the time when it started to get hard, I thought about what life really meant and why we were placed on this earth only to experience pain and loneliness. And then I realized how rare it is for anyone to experience life, and how small we are as a planet to be given an opportunity to not onl experience sadness, but also glorious joy. We live lives filled mostly with happiness, only we don't really realize it because we're so caught up in our own miseries that we forget how often we truly enjoy life. Things like hobbies, friends, family, relationships, nature... Who else in the universe gets to experience everything that we, as humans, do? It sucks that many of us go through terrible experiences in life like having bad parents, having no parents, or being abused by someone... But it's also important to understand that those things are what shape those affected into great, strong people capable of so much. Knowing, firsthand, what is bad of us as humans and to have a passion to fight for what is right.

 

I dunno... For the victim to be victimized is really a crappy feeling. But it comes with all sorts of perks, I'm not sure if I should complain about the bad things in the past anymore.

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BeautifulChaos99 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i used to let people get to me; and then i started mouthing off to them, and took fighting lessons.
ive never been messed with since. so im just saying, to all the victims
just learn to fight.
violence isnt the answer, its the question. its up to you if its yes or no.
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psychosquatch Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015
Good job. Some people definitely deserve a severe ass kicking. Just be careful. The consequences of being "walking karma" can sometimes lead to more trouble than what they can do to you.
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Hawk-tip Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

When I was getting picked on, I pent up a lot of anger until one day I just exploded with anger at each of those people who had poked fun at me. They stopped after that, and I'm glad you were able to combat the same problem.

But I hope you remember that physical fighting is only for times when you are physically assaulted in some way, and not to be used for "revenge" from hurtful words.

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BeautifulChaos99 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know it might sound strange (coming from a total stranger and all) but I'm very happy to hear you stood up yourself. It might sound a tad sarcastic, but its not when I say "Congratulations."

And I didnt use the fighting for revenge but once word got around, people stopped messing with me. Though I was (and always will be~!) A smart arse to them.
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BarryFromMars Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
According to one dream I "had", Derpy Hooves and Twilight Sparkle (Who wasn't an Alicorn at the time) lived in a bubble. Derpy then murdered Twilight and the bubble flowered and Derpy smiled. Twilight was then safe and Derpy (Who I guess was not repentant) was hurled into the sun with many other Ponies (Who I also guess weren't repentant) including one who I think was a lying car salesman.
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
I love this. Its so truthful. Excellent Job!Clap 
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Pixy-Girl101 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I cried! :')
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simplyeddie Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is truly one of my favourite pieces on here.. Very beautifully said. It gives me hope. So thank you. <3
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13th-Victim Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice one indeed
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Seizu-sha Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow I love the meaning of this poem.
Dear victims, don't give up, becouse we shall win!!! :iconstrengthplz:
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Faith-JeaLee Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Thanks for this. It helps to know that other people out there can understand the particular flavor of pain victims taste. My younger brother and I won, against our selfish father and his uncaring wife. The war has been over for about a year, but the fight to disentangle ourselves from their lies, and bleed out the poison that stains our hearts is still going. We are still in the beginning of the very long process of healing. But each day we wake up, freedom is always there to quietly greet us, and we are together, strengthening our bond as siblings. That makes everything worth it.
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brenecia14 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student Writer
This poem holds a lot of meaning for me. Thank you so much for this, it really reassures me that everything will be okay...:hug:
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013   Writer
i love it hanns it is beautiful you keep getting better
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TheLittleLocket Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!
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xDarkShadows Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I Don't Know You... But Thank You, Don't Stop Writing, Your Really Good At It.. <3 :glomp:
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Meginn Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I agree :heart: That was amazing and it really helped.
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xDarkShadows Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, thank you...Ithink...
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Meginn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Haha :iconallofthethingsplz:
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Just...thank you :happycry:
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yo1000 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
well my mom told me at 11 all prince's are dead and they got ran over by a car
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kirafaclaws22 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I dont know how you did this, but you just erased part of the effects of three years of bullying.
You are skilled.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww :) I'm so glad.
Thank you so much <3
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spitesire Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
yu dont know how much this means to me :') thank yu so much, bless yu♥
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Cwolf0615 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, thank you so much! This was just what I needed right now! You're too awesome!!! :tighthug:
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ScabraHari Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh My...
I'm literally crying right now. I've been going through a patch rougher than usual and I needed this. Thank you.

Don't ever stop writing, Please.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much.:) Stay strong.
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AuburnYears Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
...Thank you, this helped <3
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chipcarzy Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
People /really/ need too see/hear this.....
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spartan5653 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
This is really inspiring!
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MarioGamer96 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
This is very true, this is an awesome poem
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Kassy2twin Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
I love this poem, well all of yours I love
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Unabiding Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it!
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Makes perfect sense to me, well said, lovely little poem :hug:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a ton ^_^
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome
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Puppyeyes427 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, mate. ;')
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No prob :)
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ERaven77 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Now that is good poetry. Speaks to all us victims everywhere. Great job MikkiMarie :)
P.S. Remember you are only a victim if you think of yourself that way. :)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much ^_^
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ERaven77 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem :)
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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow this is inspiring!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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psychwardsweetie Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
:)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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