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Dear victims (please read),
Sometimes they just don’t believe
That what they’re doing to you
Could leave scars beneath your sleeve
A wound within your heart
A broken dream upon your mind
A tear fallen out of innocent eyes
A tragedy on rewind.
But, please don’t give up on this…
This battle fought inside
This war where you are left tied up
While they shoot you with lies.
Please, you know they’re the ones
That will never make it through
The reality of this world,
By hurting people like you.
Please, don’t give up,
Just keep fighting this battle within
And remember, while you may be the victim…
The victim always wins.
If you guys are wondering what i meant by "a victim always wins"...
I meant that, in fairytales and things like that, the people who are victims of the bad guys (i feel childish saying that, but y'know, whatever haha) always win.
Does that make sense? I dunno. I'm sorry if it doesn't D:

NEVER think you are less than anyone. NEVER hate who you are, what you look like, and NEVER give up.

I love you guys.

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Tenshi-no-hane-Okami Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes it's hard to remember that... Thanks for reminding me.   ^^
CrystalChell Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh man, I'm crying a rainstorm x'D
This is great. <:')
Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful.
gdunde Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student General Artist
if only that were true
Hawk-tip Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Around the time when it started to get hard, I thought about what life really meant and why we were placed on this earth only to experience pain and loneliness. And then I realized how rare it is for anyone to experience life, and how small we are as a planet to be given an opportunity to not onl experience sadness, but also glorious joy. We live lives filled mostly with happiness, only we don't really realize it because we're so caught up in our own miseries that we forget how often we truly enjoy life. Things like hobbies, friends, family, relationships, nature... Who else in the universe gets to experience everything that we, as humans, do? It sucks that many of us go through terrible experiences in life like having bad parents, having no parents, or being abused by someone... But it's also important to understand that those things are what shape those affected into great, strong people capable of so much. Knowing, firsthand, what is bad of us as humans and to have a passion to fight for what is right.


I dunno... For the victim to be victimized is really a crappy feeling. But it comes with all sorts of perks, I'm not sure if I should complain about the bad things in the past anymore.

BeautifulChaos99 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i used to let people get to me; and then i started mouthing off to them, and took fighting lessons.
ive never been messed with since. so im just saying, to all the victims
just learn to fight.
violence isnt the answer, its the question. its up to you if its yes or no.
Hawk-tip Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

When I was getting picked on, I pent up a lot of anger until one day I just exploded with anger at each of those people who had poked fun at me. They stopped after that, and I'm glad you were able to combat the same problem.

But I hope you remember that physical fighting is only for times when you are physically assaulted in some way, and not to be used for "revenge" from hurtful words.

BeautifulChaos99 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know it might sound strange (coming from a total stranger and all) but I'm very happy to hear you stood up yourself. It might sound a tad sarcastic, but its not when I say "Congratulations."

And I didnt use the fighting for revenge but once word got around, people stopped messing with me. Though I was (and always will be~!) A smart arse to them.
BarryFromMars Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
According to one dream I "had", Derpy Hooves and Twilight Sparkle (Who wasn't an Alicorn at the time) lived in a bubble. Derpy then murdered Twilight and the bubble flowered and Derpy smiled. Twilight was then safe and Derpy (Who I guess was not repentant) was hurled into the sun with many other Ponies (Who I also guess weren't repentant) including one who I think was a lying car salesman.
xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
I love this. Its so truthful. Excellent Job!Clap 
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