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A letter to my watchers

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Smiling through your pain,
Till the wounds stop bleeding.
Running through your clouds
Once the sky stops raining.
Never saying never,
Going faster, stronger, better
Even when the
Raindrops seem to fall down forever.

Till the birds start to sing, and
Happiness overwhelms you,
And a smile takes over your face
Now and eternally.

Surviving through the pain,
Until the wounds stopped bleeding.
It never seemed it would end,
Crying, screaming, dying...
Indeed it did, it
Died away..
Even when the raindrops would never end.
Read the first letter of each line.

You are stronger than suicide. <3

Note me if you're ever having a problem, even if i can't help, i'm here to listen. 
Love you all!

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© 2014 - 2024 MikkiMarie
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

If it was just a tad more rounded syllable wise, it would be perfect! I do like it
very much though. I can really see the healing part of your soul showing as the words flow with feeling. That is always a very very good thing. The whole idea of being positive and than in the end you show the uplifted nature you held so long as pouring out with a bit of relief, this is saying and showing too me, you are finally coming to peace within yourself and what I mean by saying this ..is you have started to accept what has hurt you inside so deeply leaving a scar on something you'll never forget but You've also become a stronger person noticing time has slowly started healing your broken heart.
Thanks 4 sharing this with us. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>