literature

All Her Little Things

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Literature Text

Stop hating her for the littlest things.
The things she can't prevent,
The things she can't save herself from..

Stop demanding her to do things,
Things she can't accomplish,
Things she can't imagine being done...

Stop lying to her,
Telling her you love her,
Want her, need her...
When all you've ever done is make her want to
Die.

Stop hating her for the littlest things.
The things she can't prevent,
The things she can't save herself from...

Because,
When those little things you've done
Take her down...
The little things won't matter anymore.
Does this need a description? ... nahh i don't think so.
All i want to say is that I apologize if it stinks.
I wrote this as quickly as i can type -.-
Didn't go over it. I'm sorry D:

Love you all. Stay strong <3
© 2013 - 2024 MikkiMarie
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:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This was very very well written. i think there were a few cinks but over all i loved it ^^
Very nice job. i hope to see more stuff like this on deviant art it sends a good message out to everyone.
i would figure it would have taken some time to get the words all together and nice as you did and i hope you plan on doing more like it.
it impacts ME alot due to personal issues.
the title drew me to it though, so a good title can go a long ways.
i am very impressed. good job