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Legs crossed on a cold basement floor,
Blood stains painting my flesh,
The wounds deeper than ever before,
A white gown now a short black dress.
Long tangled hair clinging to my tears
Wind howling through the trees,
Moonlight painting a sky so clear,
And darling, I'm going to be set free.
My fingers scratch at the blood on my skin,
A delightful pain at the thought of a touch,
And hey, everyone who said I wasn't worth it,
Tell me,
Now am I good enough?
Be prepared. I'm in a "depressing poetry" mood. 
Not saying i'm depressed, and just for the haters... THIS IS NOT FOR ATTENTION -.- 
I'm just posting it... because i love writing :)

And to anyone feeling this way in reality, please stay strong and know that you're beautiful <3

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psychosquatch Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  New member
I think you are good enough. Very talented at writing and that is a gift you can share with the whole world. There will always be haters, but screw those schmucks, you are above that crap. :)
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TotallyAnilasArt Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Just because someone write a poetry like this, doesn't mean they want to kill themselves. Some writers like to take the venom out of their hearts, this way only good feelings can be left there. Maybe the poet isn't talking about self-suicidal. It doesn't mean that the girl in the poetry is hurting herself. Maybe the poet is talking about how we hurt ourselves emotionally, not physically. Anyways, I really love this piece. Good Job!

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SilviaMarti Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice <3
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dATweet Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
Yes it is. I'm tired of all these "if youre ready to kill yourself" poetry things.
It's almost a meme to write suicide manuals.
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TROgirl Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So powerful...... :iconmoemoeplz:
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cazer112 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
depression is an illness but that doesn't matter how you deal with it is what matters my picture really does show me i am alone no matter how close i get to people im still alone but that doesn't stop me i still enjoy life and i have my day where this poem describes me and that's why i love it +favlove 
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Amyrose98005 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Student General Artist
You are always good enough. No matter what other people say.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
You're more than good enough the way you are :)
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oreo-princess23 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i really enjoyed this
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Cellahrdour Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ow i think I might want to illustrate this. I love it.
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