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I'm sorry,
that I'm not
beautiful.
I'm not a supermodel.
Are you?

I'm sorry,
that I'm not
funny.
I'm not a comedian.
Are you?

I'm sorry,
that I'm not
mature.
I'm sorry,
that I'm not
talented.
I'm sorry,
that I'm not
good enough
or,
loving enough...
or,
smart enough.

I'm not perfect.

Are you?
Just a quick poem :) Thanks for reading! <3 Comments? critiques?
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Wow, another fabulous piece from you. I can tell there is a lot of feeling in this piece.

I feel a lot of emotion in this. I feel like you have experienced some type of bullying like this, and have put it in your writing. I love that. I wish I could do that.

Nobody's perfect, and that's what this poem is screaming out to me. I feel like no one else gets this message.

A lot of people ignore the simple things in people, and focus more on what's outside, like body, looks, and don't really see the personality as much. Once again, I love seeing your work and I hope to see more.

Great job!
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This was truly amazing.... I loved it very much and it is definatley true. People really don't get we are. I thought this had a great impact on me and it will probably have a impact on other s also. It was a beautifully amazing piece of work. Please write more for us all to enjoy... :D

I also believe that you should write more for us to understand how much words can hurt. How much pain people can cause one person to feel through the words that other's speak to them. So I thank you for writing this amazing piece of literature.
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Dracosphere Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is beautiful!
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Imlookingformyself Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very cute!!!
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R-TDesigns Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not perfect either and I never expected my true love to be as well. But we know this and we except the flaws at times. I no idea what your world feels to you and I wish is was more even line like most of us. It must be like going through puberty everyday. That would be rough. But when my wife was going through her cancer treatment several years back she said that it was with my support that she made it through without going crazy. I think we all need someone like that, that understands what someone is going through and is willing to be the cushion. I'm not perfect, but I am there.
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Puppiestolauren Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Artist
your works speak so much truth. i appreciate every one of them
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TheDogDemonMarossa Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
Made a wrong turn, once or twice. dug your way out blood and fire. bad decisions? thats alright, welcome to your silly life~ Mistreated, misplaced, misunderstood, miss *knowing its so good* it didnt slow you down. Mistaken, always second guessing, underestimated, look your still around~ :music:

Pretty pretty please~ dont you ever, ever feel, like your less then less then perfect? Pretty pretty please, if you ever, ever feel, like your nothing~ you are perfect to me~ :music:

Lol, everyones perfect at being themselves so yes u are perfect in your own way :highfive:
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violet---stone Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student Writer
I got tricked by someone, they said they loved me, they didn't, and that was all I thought at the time, after I got over shock.
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amberamuawesome Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow I just keep looking at poems, thinking "this is how I feel" and "this speaks to the world" and every single one so far has been by you :)
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Sneeuwmaan Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The only ones who are perfect to you, are the ones who do not hurt you, or critisize you, who love you for who you truly are and appreciate you being on this world and adding your little puzzlepiece to the big puzzle of respect and caring. Those persons are perfect. And if you think you are not perfect; i am sure there are people who think you are. Just believe.
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Sneeuwmaan Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No one is, except the ones you love, and you if you appreciate the way you were made. And the ones who appreciate you for who you truly are and dont critisize you and dont hurt you. Those people are perfect to you, in your eyes. Beautiful poem.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
Don't be sorry. Be proud.
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