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I'm sorry,
that I'm not
beautiful.
I'm not a supermodel.
Are you?

I'm sorry,
that I'm not
funny.
I'm not a comedian.
Are you?

I'm sorry,
that I'm not
mature.
I'm sorry,
that I'm not
talented.
I'm sorry,
that I'm not
good enough
or,
loving enough...
or,
smart enough.

I'm not perfect.

Are you?
Just a quick poem :) Thanks for reading! <3 Comments? critiques?
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Wow, another fabulous piece from you. I can tell there is a lot of feeling in this piece.

I feel a lot of emotion in this. I feel like you have experienced some type of bullying like this, and have put it in your writing. I love that. I wish I could do that.

Nobody's perfect, and that's what this poem is screaming out to me. I feel like no one else gets this message.

A lot of people ignore the simple things in people, and focus more on what's outside, like body, looks, and don't really see the personality as much. Once again, I love seeing your work and I hope to see more.

Great job!
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This was truly amazing.... I loved it very much and it is definatley true. People really don't get we are. I thought this had a great impact on me and it will probably have a impact on other s also. It was a beautifully amazing piece of work. Please write more for us all to enjoy... :D

I also believe that you should write more for us to understand how much words can hurt. How much pain people can cause one person to feel through the words that other's speak to them. So I thank you for writing this amazing piece of literature.
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Dracosphere Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is beautiful!
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Imlookingformyself Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very cute!!!
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R-TDesigns Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not perfect either and I never expected my true love to be as well. But we know this and we except the flaws at times. I no idea what your world feels to you and I wish is was more even line like most of us. It must be like going through puberty everyday. That would be rough. But when my wife was going through her cancer treatment several years back she said that it was with my support that she made it through without going crazy. I think we all need someone like that, that understands what someone is going through and is willing to be the cushion. I'm not perfect, but I am there.
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Puppiestolauren Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Artist
your works speak so much truth. i appreciate every one of them
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TheDogDemonMarossa Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
Made a wrong turn, once or twice. dug your way out blood and fire. bad decisions? thats alright, welcome to your silly life~ Mistreated, misplaced, misunderstood, miss *knowing its so good* it didnt slow you down. Mistaken, always second guessing, underestimated, look your still around~ :music:

Pretty pretty please~ dont you ever, ever feel, like your less then less then perfect? Pretty pretty please, if you ever, ever feel, like your nothing~ you are perfect to me~ :music:

Lol, everyones perfect at being themselves so yes u are perfect in your own way :highfive:
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violet---stone Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student Writer
I got tricked by someone, they said they loved me, they didn't, and that was all I thought at the time, after I got over shock.
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amberamuawesome Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow I just keep looking at poems, thinking "this is how I feel" and "this speaks to the world" and every single one so far has been by you :)
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Sneeuwmaan Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The only ones who are perfect to you, are the ones who do not hurt you, or critisize you, who love you for who you truly are and appreciate you being on this world and adding your little puzzlepiece to the big puzzle of respect and caring. Those persons are perfect. And if you think you are not perfect; i am sure there are people who think you are. Just believe.
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Sneeuwmaan Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No one is, except the ones you love, and you if you appreciate the way you were made. And the ones who appreciate you for who you truly are and dont critisize you and dont hurt you. Those people are perfect to you, in your eyes. Beautiful poem.
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Don't be sorry. Be proud.
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isabelshecterstone Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist
yes!
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isabelshecterstone Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist
meaning great poem!
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candyzombielord Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
great true poem.
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kat-Yes Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
True... in a wonderful way ;)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :blush:
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PandaBear0145 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Student Artist
i love this peom because it is so true
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
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PandaBear0145 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Student Artist
welcome:)
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Dig4bugs Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is a very good poem. I very much enjoyed it.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
im glad! thank you!~
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miyu713 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is an INCREDIBLE piece! :) great job! I'd like to add it to my groups gallery :iconthespokentruth: also Id like to formally invite you to join us! :)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
of course! thanks so much!
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Chrissiemusa Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good job :)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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Chrissiemusa Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome :)
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Ravenholm Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Am I? If that is all that it takes to be 'perfect', then goddamn right I am. My turn to ask a question: why the actual fuck are you 'apologizing'? Instead of creating your own brand of perfect, you're lying down so you would be easier to catch and curb stomp.

If this comes from the heart and is meant to provoke feelings in the reader, it sure provoked some, though I'm not sure these were the right ones. Also, even free verse has to have a semblance of structure. The only structural element I see here is repetition of which there is too much.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well I thank you very much for the opinion <3
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animatedastronaut Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
Sarcasm I believe.
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ghieartwork Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
yes, i am not perfect, since i am just a human, right?
really love this... it simple but have a great impact...
ps : english not my 1st english, hehe so sorry for any mistake
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much <3 your English is fantastic :)
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minidoopidoo Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice poem ,i enjoy it
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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minidoopidoo Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome
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DanMomotoro Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student General Artist
of course I'm u_u

Well, jokes aside, I loved the poem! What do you think when you wrote it? spent, for what? or just done for fun? : 3
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just done for fun :)
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spyro-spirit-jak Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
So true... <3
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VickyandRaq Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful. :) I really love this!
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Evil-Bunny2017 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing!
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EqualToYou Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
NO! :D
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YAY!
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EqualToYou Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Naw, naw. For realzies, I am flawless. I am the priest's favorite. He told me so. I shit kittens and fart glitter.
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emo-art Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you read my mind. thank you. <3
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BabyBug-A-Boo13 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student General Artist
I love it
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Dickywebster Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
Yes I am!
I don't know what I'm perfect for yet, but I'm sure there's something :D
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Surrender-the-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
wow this just hit me in the chest
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks <3
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Asterlia Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student General Artist
This is perfection :D
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you:)
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ToxicSquirrel13 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013   Writer
my god........ :iconclapplz: exactly.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hehe thank you!!! :D
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