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Silence burns beneath the soul of young abandoned ones
Oh, the things the demons do, for now it has begun
Hush the children, quiet down, the best is yet to come
Now, the darkest shadows do shine brighter than the sun.

Watch the young kindhearted ones be thrown into the wild
See a man, so furious, as he does beat his child.

These, oh yes, these are the days, the very last of them
Tears in children's eyes do sparkle brighter than a gem.

Tribulations, trials, pain, and all that we can stand
Suddenly, through crystal skies, there's God's almighty hand
Silence burned beneath the soul of young abandoned ones...
Oh, the things that God will do, for now it has begun...
didn't know what to title this one xD
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Avi-the-Avenger Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Brought a tear to my eye, this did. Made me think of my favorite scripture in Rev 21:3, 4. Soon it will all end and we can have eternal happiness. Well done. Beautiful poem. ^^
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks sooo much :)
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EagleIronic Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013   General Artist
beautifully written, I could image this as a sone
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow! if this is a description of the great tribulation and the paradise to come then cool. you might like my series on Revelation - the "Beast of the Apocalypse" series.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It sort of is :) Thanks so much!!!
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DompteurLoup Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you chose an appropriate tittle for this. I can't exactly explain why.. but it has a certain dark energy pulsing through the words that just.. fits the tittle.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
im glad then :) thanks so much!
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