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Who are you?
Where are you?
What... are you?

The blinding white walls
Closing in on you
Trapping you
Drowning you.

Who are you?

Certainly not
yourself.
Certainly not that
happy little girl
jumping through fairy tales
as a sunset paints the silver sky.

Where are you?
Certainly not
home.
Definitely not where
you'd want to be.

What are you?
Certainly not
wanted.
Obviously not
needed.

Blood, scars, wounds.
Pain.
Torture.

All you see are shadows
In a room of white walls...
inspired by [link]
mine is not exactly an original version of it, but it's something. :)

comments and critiques?
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psychosquatch Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
I am sorry you (or anyone) ever had to deal with this. I myself was "helped" (a.k.a. tortured) twice in these hellholes before I had even hit puberty. I WILL KILL MYSELF AND ANYONE THAT DOES THAT TO ME AGAIN! At least the victims of serial killers don't have to live with the pain...
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NaruxGaara-LxLight Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love this :D your amazing
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Midnightbiter Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
I honestly believe this is my future.
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dahmii Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
deep
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redfaern Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like it very much! It kinda reminds me of a band called Evanescence - they had stuff like that. :D
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE EVANESCENCE O_O
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redfaern Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love them too :) Though I used to listen to them more. You must check out the Origin version of My Immortal - it's breathtaking. I adore also the whole TOD :D If you want, you can check my drawing of Amy:
[link]
Unfortunately I forgot my password to that account (well, I'm dumb, I know! ;) ) so I made a new one.

Once more - I like very much your poem!
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   Writer
i like it!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank youuuu!! :)
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AnimewolfRPC Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   Digital Artist
Why do you keep writing stuff that fits my thoughts and life like your reading my mind?! D: But I can't stop loving them~!^^ :iconhartplz::iconsexyhorseplz:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh dear xD well thank you! :)
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AnimewolfRPC Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   Digital Artist
Indeed. :) Your welcome~
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wiggybee101 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
creepy but awesome XD
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
xD thanks :3
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wiggybee101 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Welcome XD
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
I was just listening to a song about insanity.
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InvaderVargs Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful and haunting at the same time. I love it!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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phikazumi Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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Marmarxx Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
This is really beautiful!!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! <3
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SmartAllecSquirrel Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love this!!
It reminds me a lot of a nightmare I keep having
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
And aww i'm sorry :(
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GrimdarkElusive Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Yay~ Love it!

It's awesome. :3
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thanks <3
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GrimdarkElusive Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Welcome. <3

I made another...Do you like this one at all...? [link]

(Sorry, I'm being petty, aren't I...? XD)
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