Remember just one little thing.
There are places to go,
Where you have never been before.
How can you be sure those places are bad?
There are things to see,
Things you have never seen before.
How can you be sure those things are ugly?
There is a new tune to hear,
Something you've never heard before.
How can you be sure that tune is scary?
There are words to be said,
Things that have never been said before.
How can you be sure those words are hurtful?
There are dreams to be imagined,
Things you have never dreamed before.
How can you be sure that they are nightmares?
Darling, please don't give up.
Please stay strong.
Don't let go.
i can't think of a good ending so... just ... pleaaaaase stay strong you guys! <3
And anyone who says you can't do it? Well, ignore it. Because you can.
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I will need to go look.
That they experienced also pain
And now have a reason to tell me why
I do not have the right to die.
These people do not understand, they only think they do -
The truth is simply that they do not have a clue.
It's so terrible when people say:
"You feel much better when you work and pray!"
I was never happy and I will never be,
Because no matter what I do and what I see:
I just hate to live. I know that's hard to understand,
But life is not what I wanted or what I planned.
Of course I could fight, but why should I ?
It's so much easier for me to die.
People have called me crazy coward all the time,
That's why I wrote this little, spontaneous rhyme
Don't worry, I don't want to kill myself at the time ^^
I just hate it when people say that suicide is cowardly. It is NOT!
There are problems which can never be solved ... chronic illnesses or incurable diseases.
I have bipolar disorder since my birth (I'm 21 now) and I will have it for the rest of my life.
I will never be able to work or to have a normal life.
The most cowardly and most painful way to die is the natural death in my opinion ...
Sorry for my bad English ... I'm German ^^
Given that the people there most likely had freedom, the chance to explore, had rights and power to fight back, One can conclude that the environment and life quality are not necessarily (and most likely not) relevant as to a person's suicidal tendencies.
I live in a third world country were violent crimes are responsible for an annual death toll higher that the one found in many countries that are at war. On this year we've had an inflation of about 50%, so economically it's pretty damn hard. It's not safe, you don't feel safe, anywhere, one most always live alert to everyone and everything around you. Yet hearing about suicide here is a very rare thing, and if you come by with a good attitude you'll found we are actually very happy people, we live by, making jokes about all this mess we live in, in a jolly way, hoping and trying our best to make it a better place, we've learnt to enjoy the very simple things, everyday God's gifts, friends, the beach, the nice weather, the food, a good conversation, family, flowers, even beer, we don't take ourselves too seriously, and we don't get overly dramatic with our problems, instead, we always hope things would change for the best.
So I differ from what you say, I don't think the ones who attempt suicide are the ones you mention. From what I've learnt, those people are actually most likely to keep on fighting and keep on living, just for the hope of seeing a better future, just like we do.
But like Laureano Marquez said: "We ain't suicidal, you think we want to die without seeing how does all this shit ends?? nobody wants to miss that!, that's quite a cliffhanger."
*Cheesy line, brace urself*
"Revenge isn't the answer"
Which you know what?
Cheesy, but true.
Cheesy lines are cheesy, but no matter how cheesy, they're always true.
...Did that make sense?
Probably not ^-^
Try to make sense of it for about five minutes, then give up if you don't understand it *Shrugs*
also.. nice use of parallel structure in your stanzas... sometimes that comes across as tacky if it's used for the entire poem, but i think you made it work for you instead of against you...