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Before you kill yourself,
Remember just one little thing.

There are places to go,
Where you have never been before.
How can you be sure those places are bad?

There are things to see,
Things you have never seen before.
How can you be sure those things are ugly?

There is a new tune to hear,
Something you've never heard before.
How can you be sure that tune is scary?

There are words to be said,
Things that have never been said before.
How can you be sure those words are hurtful?

There are dreams to be imagined,
Things you have never dreamed before.
How can you be sure that they are nightmares?

Darling, please don't give up.

Please stay strong.

And please.
Don't let go.
Remember this. <3

i can't think of a good ending so... just ... pleaaaaase stay strong you guys! <3

And anyone who says you can't do it? Well, ignore it. Because you can.

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42SKINS42 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
be for i kill my self . why not see the un Sean ? is that not art  
evettejo Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so true. It's always important to try your best to remember the future when dealing with suicide. Sometimes the present is just so horrible you can't think too far ahead, you just see the immediate horrors.  I appreciate that you take the time to remind your followers of that.
matthew2479 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this. Every time I feel like I should just give up on everything, I remember this poem and read it. So I must really thank you for writing this :)
warfangiscuter Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
I have a few friends who I have to show this to. Thank you for writing this.
Leonardogirl4eve Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
TheAwkwardFangirl Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Personally, what keeps me going is my friends and family. If I commit suicide, 4other people will want to do the same, and I can't inflict that pain on the people I love. 
MIL0003 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student Artist
I always remember. I was lucky to be born. Many others arnt so lucky. Some don't even get a chance and sometimes there faits are predestined. :heart:
XmadlyinloveX Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I guess if you're at the point of wanting to end your life, you won't really be thinking about the future, if you're gonna end your life you're thinking about how bad now is, and that you just want it to stop.. you can say it's easy if you've never been through it but during that time, is is very hard to think rationally about anything. And some people don't want to bear the pain of having to wait for those good things to come. Which is understandable. I have a friend that see's me having good things but nothing has come his way yet, as in friends, a relationship, he see's everyone else in one already and he wants that and questions why he must wait for that. He isn't suicidal, but that's what suicidal people think, but they take it to the point where they just can't wait and see if something happens for the better. Cause tbh, who wants to be in that much pain, to the point they want to kill themselves and think that they may just have to wait it out a few years and be strong. Especially people that find it hard making friends. Or finding a relationship and have bad family problems. This world isn't meant to be faced alone, and many people are.. and it's hard. 
Also, when you've got the main mental problems, so depression, paranoia, anxiety, all together it can be hard, all those problems cloud everything. Trust me I have all of these things and I have in the past been suicidal and the bad things your mind throws at you makes it impossible to be rational about it. I'm just lucky I had someone to pull me out of it every time.

But anyway, enough of that xD Sorry, it's just that suicide is a subject that is touchy for me, ya know? Apart from the issue of sometimes you literally can't think of those things, some can, this is beautiful. I always like seeing people that don't see suicide as cowardly but they just see someone that needs kind words and comfort rather than saying that they must think of everyone else they're selfishly leaving behind. So thank you for writing this ^^ 
Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student General Artist posted this on my sweet 16th that got canceled...if only i had read this that day...maybe i'd be short a couple scars...
Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student General Artist
merci, i will as best as i can :)
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