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Shut up.
Shh.
Quiet.
Don’t. Say.  A n y t h i n g .

“Are you okay?”
I’m dying.
“I’m fine.”

Scream.
Cry.
P an i c .

“What’s wrong?”
Everything.
“Nothing.”

Close the window.
Open it.
Close it.
Open it again.
No, stop.
Close it.
Good.

“What’s wrong with you?”
I’m losing control.
I’m empty.
I’m dying.
I am Bipolar Disorder.

… “I don’t know.”
This is a quick poem i made on my experience with Bipolar Disorder with Psychotic Features. thanks for reading.. comments? :)
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RenegadeHeart13 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, that about nails it on the head when it comes to Bipolar. Both me and my Fiance are and...well lets just say our lives have been a living hell when it comes to family and friends and the only solace we seem to find, when our Bipolar doesnt act up, is when we are alone together...otherwise we always have to watch ourselves. Try to control it around others...Its very stressful and tiring...and it makes you feel a hell of a lot older than you already are...And both my Fiance and I are only 21!

-Raven Lily :tombstone:
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Mission-46 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
Cool poem, I am Bipolar, too!!! Tc and God bless
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Nniicole Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are a beautiful author!
I have a vague idea of what Bipolar Disorder is. Are you able explain?
Thanksss! :D
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RenegadeHeart13 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can try to explain if you wish. Ive dealt with the effects of the Bipolar dissorder since I was diagnosed with it when I was eight years old and sometime before that. leave me a message if you would like me to explain more

-Raven Lily :tombstone:
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Nniicole Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That sounds good, thank you :D
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It varies from person to person. It's just a terrifying, horrific disorder sometimes, and other times not so bad.
I can't really explain it. It's quite complex.
Thank you so much! :)
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Nniicole Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, it makes you unique so that is good but it causes pain so that is bad xD

You are honestly the best author I have ever read! (:
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me.
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SakyoDawnii Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I relate to this, though I don't know if I have bipolar disorder. ^~^
This is a great poem!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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