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You watched me melt into a dark surface.
Black paint upon the skies,
Stars sprinkled among the canvas.
Moonlight, shining from the corner of your eye.
Atramentous areas surround me.
Fog blankets the land,
Letters written to me in charcoal.
You’ve painted the world,
Black.

Pale roses,
Bright lights shining in my face.
Pasty flesh,
Clear emotions.
Bleached eyes, staring back at me.
Colorless dreams.
A world so empty, so dull.
The silver blade sinks into my neck.
I’ve painted my skin,
White.

Crimson flowers,
Upon my doorstep.
Whispers dance among my
Bloody tongue.
Fire burns bright,
Flames upon roses
And causing blisters along our skin.
Warmth melting into our souls.
A knife slices through my flesh,
As blood drips down my shoulders.

You’ve painted my world, black.
I’ve painted my skin, white.

And I've splattered the walls with red.
Wearing some black, white, and red bracelets... which inspired me for this. xD
Hopefully you enjoy? :)

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:iconbreathinbreathout:
breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013   Writer
YOU R SO GOOD IM SO JELLY XD
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IAmTheVeryBadArtist Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Jell-ay!!! This poem is-so-amazing!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol thanks bro! ^_^
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013   Writer
of course :)
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debaterarcherwriter Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Professional Writer
This disturbs me for all the right reasons.
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Unabiding Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I concur on all counts.
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AerithEchidna4rt Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa. Just, whoa.
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Dewdrops-in-the-Gras Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how the emotions are expressed into this poem. And it's really awesome with the implied cutting. Though white paint usually gets yucky after it dries. Note to self: Don't paint on skin with oil paint.
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FriesianKiss Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is touching ^^ love it
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Caro-Kitty Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I love this, especially the "red" stanza. Beautiful work as always!
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