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Shh.
Shut up.
Don't
Say
Anything.

Run.
Faster.
Faster.
Faster.
Stop.

Scream.

Fear.

Die.

Demons in the shadows
Twisting
Turning
Staring.
Watch yourself
Bleeding.

Quiet now.
Hush, child.
They'll find a way
To get you.

Beatings, swallowing you.
Scars, defining you.
You.
Breaking.
Crying.
Dying.

After all
You know you're weak.

You can't fight a bully
When the bully's inside of you.
My little writing on bullies. thanks all for the wonderful comments and favorites!! <3 and watches! love those! :)

comments appreciated ^.^

THANK YOU :iconinvaderzib13: for the IDEA! :D I couldn't think of a better title... ._.
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Tenshi-no-hane-Okami Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I  am bullied by the daemons in my head to...
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
I was bullied during middle school. It made both my mind and my body stronger. Don't give up. Keep going.
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AskRyata Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
((Those last two lines spread a shiver down my spine. I rarely get that reaction from poetry but when I do, I know I've read something work reading. I'm amazed by all your poetic skill and this is no exception. Those last two lines really struck me, because of how much this relates to me. I wish I could say something less cliche, but keep doing what you're doing and don't give up!))
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you!!! <3
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013   Writer
loveeee
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks bro!
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAYAYAYAAYAYAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
THANK YOU!
I appreciate you for giving me some of da credit!
I LOVE it when my work inspirs others!
(thereshouldbemorepeoplelikeyou*coughcough*jk)
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brighter06 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013   Traditional Artist
another genius work of yours.. i also experienced to be bullied but not that harsh as whats in your work. i believed that every child experience to be bullied and it makes every child to be stronger.. i just noticed that many of your works shows pains and sadness, i just want to advice, make a work with an optimistic side but i still like "Bully" great!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
aw thank you so much! :)
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he11ow0rld Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
I like this, in a kind of, reminds-me-of-things-I-hate kind of way.
"They'll find a way
To get you."
As long as you believe that, they will.
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