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Feel the pain aching through your bones
Your flesh, seemingly fading to dust
Your mind, burning
Your thoughts, racing.
Dying.
Breaking.

"It'll be okay."
No it won't.
"I know."

Fight the tears, your father can't see you cry.
After all
You're a fighter.
Right?

"You can do this."
No, I can't.
"Thank you."

Breathe.
Slower.
Slower.
No.
Faster.
Stop.

Shut up.

You
Can't
Win.

After all
You don't have cancer.

Cancer
Is who you are.
This is what I'd imagine goes through a person's head when they have cancer.
Of course, everyone is different.
And some people may not go into depression after hearing about Cancer and maybe they really do believe in the happy thoughts, unlike I was expressing here.
I'm sorry if I was wrong D:
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jessi-dragon-rider Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it when you write a poem like this one *-*
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:iconpaultrainer:
I see things I have never experienced. To be able and helpless because you cant help is in your poem too....[link]......
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:iconmysocksrock:
This is pretty much exactly what went through my head... each of the three times I found out I had cancer.
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MikkiMarie Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so sorry :( but thank you so much!!!! ^.^
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brighter06 Jan 5, 2013   Traditional Artist
incredible and genius!
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MikkiMarie Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much :)
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writeacrossme Jan 4, 2013  Student Writer
Someone very close to me made it through Cancer. I think this was kind of what was going through his head; that and fear. This is really good.
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MikkiMarie Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! :) I'm glad he made it through cancer ^.^
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:iconflower7052:
this is really good! my gran had cancer and died due to complications and judging by what she went through this is pretty accurate.
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MikkiMarie Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so sorry :( Thank you so much though!
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