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Sink the blade into your heart and watch your troubles fade
See the blood drip slowly as the memories invade
Feel the sorrow drench you with your own pathetic cries
Watch your body disappear into your many lies
Taste the broken happiness that lies upon your face
Breathe the air of loneliness, for you were a disgrace
Turn the many pages of the story not yet told
Touch the falling sunsets and the skies of ruined gold
Reach for every laugh that dares to stand before you now
Feel the lost emotion that has grasped your mind somehow
Force the knife into your skin and watch your future die
Feel the deep regret that you can no longer deny
Taste the words unspoken slip away into the air
Struggle for a breath without a moment left to spare
Wrap your fingers slowly 'round the trigger of the gun
Close your eyes and be prepared, for now the days are done
Hang your head in shame and say your final set of words
Watch your heartbeat turn to dust and know you have been cured...

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!Ammb96 Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is a great piece. The flow is awesome and I love how you never really notice that lines are rhyming they just blend in perfectly. Other than that just a really nice dark emotional poem.
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:iconmikkimarie:
Thanks so much!! Your comment just completely made my day! :)
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!Ammb96 Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome. The comment was well deserved.
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~Blood-Red-Cure Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, though a lot more interesting.
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:iconmikkimarie:
Thank youuu :D :D :D means a ton!
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~Blood-Red-Cure Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome! :hug:
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~dancingdawn62 Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Dark and emotional. just the way I like it, bro. Great job. :)
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~dancingdawn62 Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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:iconangellove94:
how was serviceXd
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