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She wants to cut the world away...
So she cuts her arm instead.
Simple little ..poem? O_o thanks for reading :)
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I enjoyed the short .....story? I don't know what to call it,but it speaks to how people who have,will,and feel like committing suicide.It is heart felt.If only someone would help those people.But you must remember not on,y girls commit suicide and are sucicidle but also boys,so don't forget about a he or him in any more sucicide poems.But your ....poem....maybe,still don't know what to call it, it quit unique.Not many writers talk about suicide and I would like to hear more,much much more.Good luck with future writes and best wishes to you,you wonderful writer you.yowo you only write once yolo :) <3
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depressed-angel26 Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
If only people knew… :'(
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:iconhetalialover379:
Two small lines but with such powerful meaning! Well done.

This also helps me understand my friends, as sadly i have 2 friends who recently started cutting... Thankyou.
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SoraLove Jul 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, powerful. :heart:

Keep writing! :D
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LadiesWishMadness Jul 4, 2013  Professional Writer
You are very right, it hurts so we do it, people think it's stupid, I think its a away to scape
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emi-tweaks Jun 27, 2013  Student General Artist
wooww
short
but
so much emotion :'c
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Melodygirl74 Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
THATS ME!!!!!!!!! how can do that??! how can u sum up so many people with just 13 words and 4 periods?!
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:iconkillerlord123:
Short poems can sometimes have the most impact.
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kirafaclaws22 Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aah...its...its so true...
Thats pretty much my life story right there...
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CupcakeCarmen123 Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very nice.
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Sneeuwmaan Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not to insult you but.. All these disease and disorder things and subjects, does anyone you know have these??? Bevause i think you are really strong if you can make such poems about them with such impact. Respect.
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