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Cuts

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She wants to cut the world away...
So she cuts her arm instead.
Simple little ..poem? O_o thanks for reading :)
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I enjoyed the short .....story? I don't know what to call it,but it speaks to how people who have,will,and feel like committing suicide.It is heart felt.If only someone would help those people.But you must remember not on,y girls commit suicide and are sucicidle but also boys,so don't forget about a he or him in any more sucicide poems.But your ....poem....maybe,still don't know what to call it, it quit unique.Not many writers talk about suicide and I would like to hear more,much much more.Good luck with future writes and best wishes to you,you wonderful writer you.yowo you only write once yolo <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> <3