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Daddy, don't lie to me, I wanna know
Where is she hiding, and why did she go?
Daddy, don't lie to me, please, pretty please
It's like I can hear her voice within the breeze.
Daddy, don't lie to me, where did she run?
Daddy, I know all the things you have done.

Daddy, don't lie to me, I've seen her scars
Hidden from me like the faraway stars.

Daddy, don't tell me, I don't wanna hear
I'm hoping these thoughts are just worries, just fears.
Daddy, don't tell me, I can't stand the facts
I just wanna think this is some silly act.

Daddy, I love you, you know this is true
But honestly, why do you do what you do?

Daddy, I saw you when you pushed her down
She screamed and she cried, and you made not a sound.
Daddy, I saw you when you stabbed her back
She fell to the floor and again, you attacked.
Daddy, I saw when you stole her goodbyes
And Daddy, I saw when you silenced her cries.

Daddy, don't lie to me, I know the truth...
You hurt her, you killed her, you've darkened my youth.

Daddy, don't hurt me, I won't tell a soul
I've learned all my lessons, I've learned self control.
Daddy, don't hurt me, it won't make you glad
You'd lose all you want and you'd lose all you have.
Daddy, don't hurt me, I swear I'll obey
Just please, never hurt me, and we'll be okay.

Daddy, don't hurt me, please put down that gun...
I really am sorry for being someone.
Daddy, don't hurt me, they'll catch you, you know.
Daddy, please Daddy, please don't let me go.
Daddy, don't hurt me, don't do this again...
I love you so much Daddy, please Daddy...

Bam.
Child abuse poems for the win!
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TracyStromberg Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww! It was awesome and sad at the same time! Thanks for creating this. :meow:
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*jaw drops* Amazing~! <33 I was really into this! And the ending tied it up so well... great job!! :D
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DownUnderDame Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist

I love your poems :giggle:

They're so creative and I love how they're so dark :D

 

Writing a novel could be very hard, but it's your decision, so if you want to write a novel,

Then go ahead and write one! :la:

 

Good luck! :D

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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Scary. And it gets worse when we realize it happens around the world every day.
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Kassy2twin Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Man, that almost made me cry , i wonder if it's real or not ?
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's not. :) Thanks so much!
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Datas-Girl Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh wow, this was a very well-written and powerful poem. I've read some of your other work as well. Keep it up.
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lionesspride99 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
holy crap... feeling slightly comatose after reading that... your poetry's fkn amazing and very scary js..
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WickerWolfArt Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
"Daddy, don't lie to me, I've seen her scars
Hidden from me like the faraway stars."
That was my fave line, even though stars are far away you can still see them, the same as the mother's scars. ;) very nice
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much ^.^ i love people analyzing my poems xD
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