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Daddy, don't lie to me, I wanna know
Where is she hiding, and why did she go?
Daddy, don't lie to me, please, pretty please
It's like I can hear her voice within the breeze.
Daddy, don't lie to me, where did she run?
Daddy, I know all the things you have done.

Daddy, don't lie to me, I've seen her scars
Hidden from me like the faraway stars.

Daddy, don't tell me, I don't wanna hear
I'm hoping these thoughts are just worries, just fears.
Daddy, don't tell me, I can't stand the facts
I just wanna think this is some silly act.

Daddy, I love you, you know this is true
But honestly, why do you do what you do?

Daddy, I saw you when you pushed her down
She screamed and she cried, and you made not a sound.
Daddy, I saw you when you stabbed her back
She fell to the floor and again, you attacked.
Daddy, I saw when you stole her goodbyes
And Daddy, I saw when you silenced her cries.

Daddy, don't lie to me, I know the truth...
You hurt her, you killed her, you've darkened my youth.

Daddy, don't hurt me, I won't tell a soul
I've learned all my lessons, I've learned self control.
Daddy, don't hurt me, it won't make you glad
You'd lose all you want and you'd lose all you have.
Daddy, don't hurt me, I swear I'll obey
Just please, never hurt me, and we'll be okay.

Daddy, don't hurt me, please put down that gun...
I really am sorry for being someone.
Daddy, don't hurt me, they'll catch you, you know.
Daddy, please Daddy, please don't let me go.
Daddy, don't hurt me, don't do this again...
I love you so much Daddy, please Daddy...

Bam.
Child abuse poems for the win!
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TracyStromberg Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww! It was awesome and sad at the same time! Thanks for creating this. :meow:
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*jaw drops* Amazing~! <33 I was really into this! And the ending tied it up so well... great job!! :D
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DownUnderDame Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist

I love your poems :giggle:

They're so creative and I love how they're so dark :D

 

Writing a novel could be very hard, but it's your decision, so if you want to write a novel,

Then go ahead and write one! :la:

 

Good luck! :D

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Scary. And it gets worse when we realize it happens around the world every day.
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Kassy2twin Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Man, that almost made me cry , i wonder if it's real or not ?
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's not. :) Thanks so much!
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Datas-Girl Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow, this was a very well-written and powerful poem. I've read some of your other work as well. Keep it up.
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lionesspride99 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
holy crap... feeling slightly comatose after reading that... your poetry's fkn amazing and very scary js..
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WickerWolfArt Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
"Daddy, don't lie to me, I've seen her scars
Hidden from me like the faraway stars."
That was my fave line, even though stars are far away you can still see them, the same as the mother's scars. ;) very nice
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much ^.^ i love people analyzing my poems xD
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WickerWolfArt Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
^^ I love to analyze them lol
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evettejo Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is... uhm... well I'm crying. If that helps you understand how completely mind boggling that was. I get lost in your poems dear. Keep writing. :heart:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
O_O
CRY BABY!
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evettejo Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
shaddap
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tabbycat1212 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh wow...I'm crying, right now. That got me; Very nicely done.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aw thank you :)
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tabbycat1212 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're entirely welcome.
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WolfTears9192 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Ah you make me so jealous lol I write but I could never write that good amazing work
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aw thank you! I'll bet you can though! :)
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WolfTears9192 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Well thank ya I have a few about abuse but they aren't no where near as good as this lol
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you ^.^
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Sydneysarus Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
...Good oh my god, but still... wow
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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Sydneysarus Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh my God...
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piccololover Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
wow that is crazy! good poem with a story that helps remind people what is in the world and to try to help those in need. like this. Really good
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks so much! ^.^
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sherlock24 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
this is so powerful and your words are very effective. Well done, my friend, well done.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much ^.^
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sherlock24 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
You're so welcome!
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Chukapix Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So powerful... Amazing job!!!
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much ^.^
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Chukapix Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome :D
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MedusaArt Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
I have tears in my eyes. :( Such a sad poem. . .
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry!!! Thank you though :D
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MedusaArt Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome!
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ZanderKahdoma Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Photographer
trying not to cry right now, that was beautiful
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aw thanks :)
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ZanderKahdoma Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Photographer
you're welcome :D you did a great job
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Chilling...
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
:)
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
LOVE IT!!!
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012   Writer
uhmazing :3
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Tank you sir :3
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012   Writer
so u didnrt wrote t?? tht suck
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Huh?
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012   Writer
did u wrote that or no?
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes i did :D
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012   Writer
omg!! that amzing!! ur a amazing writter dear
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aw thank you :)
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