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Dear mommy, please don't hurt yourself.
I need you to hold my hand.
From crossing the little old gravel road
To helping me find wonderland.

Dear mommy, please don't hate yourself.
I love the way you used to be.
Happy and joyful, so filled with love
Or at least that's how you seemed to me.

Dear mommy, maybe I don't understand.
But please don't let yourself go.
I need you now more than ever,
And more than you'll ever know.

Dear mommy, please don't leave me.
I love you.. Don't you understand?
Mommy, please don't kill yourself.

I still need you to hold my hand.
A message to my mom...
I love you mom :/ I don't care how old I get, I will ALWAYS be your little girl.

Go check out my facebook for more poetry or just to chat, [link]

Love you all. <3
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LoveMySockhead12 Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww.. Wow ;-;
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LuluTheDragonQueen Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer

I've been meaning to comment on this for a very long time but whenever I so much as skim the first stanza again, I start sobbing and shaking until I wear myself out and fall asleep…

 

It's, it's a very nice piece but… .

It breaks my heart and I feel helpless because I've tried everything I possibly could think of to help my mommy and nothing ever seems to work.

 

I know I don't show it sometimes but I love her more than my own life and I just want her to go back to being the strong, beautiful, happy woman she was when I was a little girl… I want someone to read this and please help me because I'm scared for her and I feel like a worthless daughter and I just want to give up. If I can't save my mom then I don't see the point in being alive any longer…

 

I finally stopped crying and I just took some Benadryl. I'm probably going to fall asleep soon, so I'll stop rambling now and log out.

 

Ignore this if you want…

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:iconglassmuses:
*hugs*
Make sure that she knows how much you love her. Every day, remind her.
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:iconbutterkuppas:
Crap. I must cut down on the depressing stuff, I told myself today after reading tragic textbook passages, but then I come across this...
dammit. But great job anyways.
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Loving-Chakra Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
How lucky your mother is to have such an amazing daughter like you. Lovely poem. :heart:
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:iconcunningchicken:
I love this... it's just so happy in sad way...!
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Flaming-Forests Jul 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This...I can't explain the feeling! This seriously made me tear up!
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tommyboywood Jul 11, 2013  Professional Writer
:) hope springs eternal
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Hope grows greener than grass stains.

- Lyric excerpt from "Centre for Holy Wars" by The New Pornographers (Yes, That's a band name.)
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Ashtheawesome12401 Jul 11, 2013  Student Artist
Awww
this was really good
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