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Wishing to disappear
never to existed in their mind
no reason to cheer
this is why I was designed
there's a cloud over me and its raining knives
all smiles are faked
no one hears his cry's
as he sits there shivers and shakes
doesn't even try to reach out because there's nothing there
only my own numb stare

no desire to fight the devils wrenches
would anyone notice if I could disappear
because Im starting to  feel warm in these trenches
would they even shed a tear?
Sick of the acting
let me compost with the dirt
live????..... ill think Ill be passing
lets make sure this hurts
still wishing to disappear
lets seal this coffin with a drop of blood and a tear
a poem by my friend, :iconbreathinbreathout: :) comment please! so he can see that he's an awesome poet!
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:icondeadhope4ever:
deadhope4ever Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
great poem
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ChiakiCross Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He's a great poet!
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MikkiMarie Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I agree! :D
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:iconangellove94:
he is amazing ! :D
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StitchMonster Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with you, he is an amazing poet. I love this poem~
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MikkiMarie Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :)
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:iconshadow19967:
shadow19967 Feb 21, 2013  Professional Writer
Cool
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MikkiMarie Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
he's a great poet, right?!
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shadow19967 Feb 21, 2013  Professional Writer
Yesh. Awsome poet.
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MikkiMarie Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
HAHA! PROOF! XD
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