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Run.
Faster.
Faster.
Stop.

Scream.

Shh.

Don't
Say
A n y t h i n g .

His words are swords
Stabbing you.
His beatings are cruel
Wounding you.

His love for you
Cradles you
In a sea of cruelty and despair.

"Please don't hurt me," you cry
Your last words as poison
In the air.

"Shut up," he screams,
His words echoing through
The cold and lonely bedroom.

he sinks a knife into your chest
The blood pouring out
So elegantly.
The pain of the blade
Couldn't compare to the pain of
The Truth.

After all.
He loved you.
Right?
Something i wrote in literally like two minutes. =P
Thanks all for reading! Please comment and fave if you liked, and if you didn't like it, tell me why!!! ^.^
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
This is great.
I love the way it is written :) good work, keep it up !=D
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MajorIbiza Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
I didn't like it because it sucked. I'm talking major major monkey ball sack.

I guess this is "the pain of the truth."
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Woohoo! HONESTY! :D
Thank you! :D :D :D
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MajorIbiza Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Did it take you as long to write the reply as it did the monkey ball sack poem?

I like to think of it as monkey spousal abuse where the bloody knife is just poop being flung.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha xD I dunno how long it took me to reply =P
but it took me about two minutes to write the poem, and agree this one sucks. So i take no offense :D
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Kartphotos Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
from the title to the end is an amazing literature..i think if you continue with this deepness you would be an awesome writer of short stories
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! <3
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Kartphotos Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome
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Cklovingston Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
So deep, so deep *u*
I can picture this and vividly make a small video of this within my head,
I love your stuff!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thank you!!! ^.^ That just completely made my day! :)
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