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We're going to try something new
Eating our meals, and swallowing each bite,
Not hiding the chewed up remains under our tongue,
And not making ourselves vomit through the night.

We're going to try something new,
Bringing the liquor down from our lips,
Not turning to the alcohol for comfort,
Until the addiction rips.

We're going to try something new,
Throwing away the needles, the pins, and the blades
Not searching underneath our skin for emotion,
Watching the wounds and the scars fade.

We're going to try something new,
Darling, I challenge you, I dare you.
We're going to try something new...
Darling,
Why does that scare you?
Finally, over my writer's block! <3
Love you guys. Stay strong.

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Leonardogirl4eve Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
I really need to start telling more people(as in close peoples friends) my fears and nightmares because I don't tell anyone anything and  me not telling anyone this is messing with my emotions.
Thank you for making this.
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student General Artist
ok, i'll try this new something...even though it does scare me.
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Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
its scarese me because... im not sure i could survive
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Blue-Midnight-Angel Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are very inspiring. Very.
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ForgottenFears Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
I think it's awesome that you write things for people on a subject that most shy away from. Thank you for being understanding for people that feel that way, rather than judging. Thank you for writing these things to lift them up rather than keep tearing them down. It's beautiful and touching and I hope it makes every person who reads them a little bit happier knowing that someone cares enough to reach out and say that yes you are strong.
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Dreaming-of-Rain-97 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love this :) thank you
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IllFatedSoul Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
some of my friends would benefit from seeing this
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Q-E-A Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for sharing this
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scarheart2001 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
all I want to say is thank you
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HM-Dragon-Dreamer Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great poem! Sends a very good message too. Thank you for this!
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Zatanna-YoungJustice Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student General Artist
I agree with other comments. GREAT mood
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!!! :)
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anila73 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D I love the mood of this one 
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well I just cried... this is beautifully written and it makes me all not-alone-feeling...
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awwh i'm glad! <3 I'm always here for you if you need someone to talk to! :)

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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awh thank you! ;3 you dA people are the best!
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Im-o-KAY-now Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student General Artist
I like the power behind the words, but also the softer meaning hidden in plain sight. Very good love.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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xMushixMux Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is an amazing poem! ^-^ And it gets the message acrossed beautifully
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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xMushixMux Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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murderousHONESTY Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
all your poems are so well done, ah, this one brought me to tears.. wonderful work as always <3
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ahh thank you!!
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murderousHONESTY Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
no problem!
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Kijinii Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
When I read your poems, it's really hard to hold my tears back! You're so wonderful!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh goodness <3 Thanks so much!!
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Hello-Fools Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
had a friend go through this hospital and everything....so terrifying
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry! :(
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Ruu123 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student General Artist
This is an absolutely amazing poem. Really pulls on my heartstrings. Thanks for that :)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you 
^_^
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XxRockFiendxX Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
<3
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Etsu-S Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
this is encouraging, please keep writing like this ^^ it's really really cool
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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Etsu-S Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
you're welcome ^^
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Skye-42 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student General Artist
*reads the comments below me* ...How do people feel loved by this poem? It reminds me of 2p!England... With his cupcakes... :iconderpyshrugplz: Oh well, me and my sick, twisted mind. ^^ Still, great poem, going straight into my faves~ 
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!!! <3
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Skye-42 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem~
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NoriMori Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
Wow! I love it!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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scottluvsjenna Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student General Artist
OMG! This is so awesome! Hey, can I ask you something? How'd you get over your writer's block? I've been experiencing it for almost a year now... :/
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I just wrote random words down that rhymed. Eventually the writer's block went away~! <3
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scottluvsjenna Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Aw. Okay. I'll try that. Thank you. <3

I used to write at the most 3 poems in a day when I was still in school. In college, I was writing only one poem in an entire month, and then now. It's like 3 months pass and I can't get past the two lines. Anyway. That sucks. Makes me feel as if I'm losing my talent. :/
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I'm sorry :( Hopefully it gets better. :)
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scottluvsjenna Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student General Artist
:) Thanks. I hope it does. :heart:
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MariaMaple Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is awesome, I loved it
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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MariaMaple Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Youre welcome (:
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