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Twigs scraping viciously at open wounds
Stabbing my flesh as I quickly sprint through
A forest so dark, and so cold, and so thick
My heart has been shattered, it’s making me sick
Ripped dirty clothing and blood in my eyes
No one is near to hear my fatal cries
Battling words while I’m battling fists...


How do you fight what just doesn’t exist?
Well... yeah. About hallucinations and all that fun stuff xD
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dontyoulovemeDaddy Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm spamming your inbox with favs XD
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TracyStromberg Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome
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moscone73 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
This one and the poem entitled to some people are both good. Your shorter poems seem to be best, and although rhyming poetry is not my thing, you did well with this one. You have a lot of raw talent and potential; keep cultivating it. When I was your age I went through a few things myself, but later I realized that most people and things I encounter on a daily basis are neither good nor bad, but altogether meaningless. I know it's not always easy to see through the depression and recognize this, but a strong person such as yourself will catch glimpses of it in time I'm sure
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Rainy-Grey-Sky Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow. this is exactly what im facing right now.
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Seizu-sha Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's such a nice poem, sad, but nice.
Even without you're discription I started to notice that is was a hallucination.
I wonder if you had that to. Becouse it almost sounds as if it where you.
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niieani Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
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SilviaMarti Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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kinkyDivers Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
Wow Short and Vivid I love It
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Dee and intense, great poem again, love it......:love:
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