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Dearest reader, please think twice before you try to speak
Words can be like knives that cause the victim to grow weak
Thoughts can be as bullets shooting freely through the sky
Injuring the innocent with every spoken lie

Please forget my laughter, please forget my broken heart
Please do not remember how you tore my life apart
Leave me as a memory that slowly fades to grey
Spend your days as usual, and I shall fade away

Listen to my cry for help, although it is too late
I've become the monster that you struggled to create
Trying to be perfect was a wonderful mistake…
Now I mustn't worry about which chance I will take.

Please erase all memory of who I tried to be
Please do not remember how I tried to be set free
Please do not be saddened under any circumstance …
What's makes now so different from when you still had a chance?
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012   Writer
lurvee it
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank ya! :D
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
This is awesome!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!! :)
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turne1jn Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
love it
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sorashowfan13 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Writer
Amazing :)
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Surrender-the-Rose Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
This was so amazing. I love "deep" stuff like this.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much ^.^
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EllerySan Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! I get a very deep feeling from this poem. I love the way you used the knives as a symbol of pain, it added to the deep feeling the poem gives.
Great Job, I really liked it. I can't wait to see mmore of your work, therefore I will Watch you. :squee:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconyayzplz: DAZ SO COOL!
Thank you! :3

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