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It feels as if my reflection
Points a gun at its own head,
As my bullet shoots the mirror
And paints the floor with red,
And it feels as if my gun
Just isn't steady in my hand,
Because darling, when I jump off cliffs,
Do you think I always land?

It feels as if the razor blade
Might be my only friend,
And it feels as if the broken glass
Might soon begin to bend,
Because my reflection is distorted, love.
Can't you see that, love, can't you see?
I'm pointing a gun at the mirror,
And the mirror points back at me.

Just a quick poem.

I'll get back to the encouraging ones soon :) promise!!


If someone is really going through something tragic, please stay strong. Feel free to note me if you'd like <3

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FaeryWriter Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is one of the best written poems I have ever read. Truly emotional and beautiful. Keep up the fantastic work. Your'e amazing!
coffissa Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
been there...
firelight342 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
Beautiful, truly amazing :D  
Lestania3439 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I got chills. . . it describes what my cousin almost did to herself. . . I had to stop her myself. . .
AnimeLuver2013 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you should red my story that really happend. Its on my page comment please
ddog101rocks Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I find that every poem of yours, I end up adding to my favorites.
AnimeLuver2013 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow once again I look on the inside of you words and find your true meaning in these poems you write! 
ForgottenSea Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
Quite nice,the rhymes that you don't notice at the first glance and still make it sound rhythmic in your head makes the piece quite enjoyable.
SatanLivesEternally Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
GOD. You are an amazing writer. I absolutely adore the way the story, if you may, is brought across. Phenomenal. 
Tessaasx Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful poem! Keep up the good work :)
SPIKE295 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Truly emotional; and beautifully written. :heart:
SoraLove Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love your imagery! The bending shards of glass is great! Keep writing! :)
TeddyMannen Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Well written.
I love both kinds of your poems. The dark ones feel relatable while the positive ones make me feel better. Thanks for them all.
JonnySQ Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your encouraging ones are nice, but your sad dark ones have more impact and concentration of emotion. And even though they may be sad, they make me realize that more people go through a dark phase than just me. 

Keep writing Darling.
MayaHaka Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love it <3
JC-Rose Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love your work doll
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