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Hello darling.
I see you're hiding behind long sleeves.
I can see you trying to cover up your "ugly side" with gemstones and lace, with pretty clothes and make up.
But, hello darling.
You can show me.

Hello dear.
I see you're pushing away your dinner.
I can see you thrusting fingers down your throat into the sink, trying to hide your secret with laughter and smiles.
But, hello dear.
You can show me.

Hello honey.
I see you're hiding behind these precious things that the others care so much about.
I see you're upset with who you are, in fear that who you are might upset others.
I see you're broken, and I see, you're outspoken. You're lost and confused.
I see you're trying to hide something.
But, hello honey,
Hello dear,
Hello darling.
You can show me.

Because I don't care what they say about you.

I won't listen.
I was gonna call it "Hello sweetie"... but then....
Doctor who comments EVERYWHERE O_O

so...

Something i wrote really fast inside McDonalds XD Love you guys!! <3

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:icondarkdarling98:
Oh wow, this is amazing!
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CorinnaAngela Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:}Pikachu want it  hello, MikkiMarie-darling! yey!You made my day again.
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romancefreak Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is such a BEAUTIFUL poem!!! :love: It really touches me!! Well done!
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MikkiMarie Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :D
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romancefreak Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. :)
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dizxy55 Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so good! I love it :) I like the way you wrote it. And its true
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Yoru-Sasayaki Aug 12, 2013   General Artist
Oh, I love this! It's so true! Everyone has something they hide, and this portrays that wonderfully. It would make an awesome song. :D
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If-Cloud-Was-A-Girl Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a really good piece.
Your imagery pushes past the "implied" and makes the reader sit up and see reality.
The "Hello darling" gives and ominous, almost creepy touch until the end, where you realise the narrator is the only one who truly cares.
I love it :)
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racerman56 Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Well written, says so much about being a true friend
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imichaotheechidna Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist

Very tender. Makes me think of Mommy.

O///O Being consoled by Mommy anyway, not saying this to her

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