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Hello darling.
I see you're hiding behind long sleeves.
I can see you trying to cover up your "ugly side" with gemstones and lace, with pretty clothes and make up.
But, hello darling.
You can show me.

Hello dear.
I see you're pushing away your dinner.
I can see you thrusting fingers down your throat into the sink, trying to hide your secret with laughter and smiles.
But, hello dear.
You can show me.

Hello honey.
I see you're hiding behind these precious things that the others care so much about.
I see you're upset with who you are, in fear that who you are might upset others.
I see you're broken, and I see, you're outspoken. You're lost and confused.
I see you're trying to hide something.
But, hello honey,
Hello dear,
Hello darling.
You can show me.

Because I don't care what they say about you.

I won't listen.
I was gonna call it "Hello sweetie"... but then....
Doctor who comments EVERYWHERE O_O

so...

Something i wrote really fast inside McDonalds XD Love you guys!! <3

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ohmygoskjackfrost Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ur poetry is so beautiful im almost to tears. keep it up!
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nikilia12345 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
amazing
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Darkdarling98 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist
Oh wow, this is amazing!
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CorinnaAngela Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:}Pikachu want it  hello, MikkiMarie-darling! yey!You made my day again.
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romancefreak Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is such a BEAUTIFUL poem!!! :love: It really touches me!! Well done!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :D
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romancefreak Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. :)
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dizxy55 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so good! I love it :) I like the way you wrote it. And its true
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Yoru-Sasayaki Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   General Artist
Oh, I love this! It's so true! Everyone has something they hide, and this portrays that wonderfully. It would make an awesome song. :D
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If-Cloud-Was-A-Girl Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a really good piece.
Your imagery pushes past the "implied" and makes the reader sit up and see reality.
The "Hello darling" gives and ominous, almost creepy touch until the end, where you realise the narrator is the only one who truly cares.
I love it :)
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