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Why is it,
That when you try your best
Not to hurt a soul...

You end up getting hurt
More than anybody else?
Not a poem XD Not really poetic at all.
Complete crap actually =P

Anyway, enjoy! <3
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student General Artist
yeah,
...this is completely true.

Sort-of all the time for me.
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know this feel. :iconiknowthatfeelplz:
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zilzalisme Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
a life without hurt, is a very wasted life..........
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If-Cloud-Was-A-Girl Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Karma,
It's not a fast-food, but you'll find a good slice of it when you need it most Heart 
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MelaNeko-KasumiInu Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
story of my life.
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ryoko548 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
So true
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shetheraven Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Story of my life. Sad...
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:iconroup14:
roup14 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013   Digital Artist
it 's true !
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Janed-Rain Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
I like it. 
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Pikatree1 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
The message here is implied through a lot of times of my life; it's accurate.
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kiku----honda Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=n= Because some jerks take advantage of your kindness.
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snailspot Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
because to protect others from pain, you must feel it instead
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LilyHeart101 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
Oh my god, yes. This is me. No matter what I do, no matter how kind I am, I always end up getting hurt. More often betrayed. :tear: No, I disagree!  And no, this wasn't crap at all. It was short but to the point. :)

Well done.  Keep it up.
Meow :3 Clap Hug Heart Heart 
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chipples19 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Two possible answers to that...

One, beacause you're trying, not doing.
Two, becuause you're not taking necessary risks.
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Platti Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*sighs* Amen to this one. 
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bakagohome Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sucks when you try not to hurt anybody and you hurt everybody >.< and yourself.
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Shriss Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think there is a Christian saying...something like "the road to hell is paved with good intentions"
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kiku----honda Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's a nice line. :)
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xaroleht Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
I think it has something to do with opening your sensitive side to the universe, and the negative elements are attracted to that stuff... You...WE..just need to be better prepared and understand the possible consequences that come along with opening your heart.=D. If you've taken on too much darkness and hurt just let it out and move on... Find some one to help you carry your burdens.... Like samwise
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anila73 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ugh, I know.
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Deepizzaguy Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student Writer
I can relate to that. Just ask Spider Man when in the cartoons when he battles bad guys his friends and family get hurt by his enemies. What I meant I can relate to your story is that some people think because I am an immigrant from another nation the person assumes I am not a patriot but an alien invader.  
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xaroleht Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
Zim?
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Deepizzaguy Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Student Writer
What I meant to say was that the leaders of Word Girl Wiki do not like my writings they are accusing of sending them spam and they have gone as far as insulting my patriotism. They do not appreciate me so I left their group. Their leader who I will not mention by name  is angry that You Tube has taken down her Word Girl videos and told us to beat it and it is too bad we don't like her work. I told them it was not my fault I was not born in the  U S A but in small country between Costa Rica and Colombia.
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xaroleht Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
Interesting id like to check that out.. What did you say that freaked em out so much? ... I wouldn't let it other you too much tho, brains seem to be on the decline these days.... Maybe that's why we haven't seen any zombies lately...... Also, one of my dear friends is from Gujarat, India and lives in a part of the us that is known for racism. He remains completely unaffected by it by not ever even thinking about it... Even if I notice some one doing it, he laughs at me and says I pay too much attention to pointless things... I've learned that this is the best way to deal with negative attitudes. If you don't give them the attention they are begging for than they go away. Just laugh it off and find a place that you like where they like you back! :D

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Deepizzaguy Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Student Writer
Believe it or not I am a online journalist for Allvoices and I wrote a story about a former New England Patriots football player Wes Welker did an interview for Sports Illustrated  saying the reason he left New England Patriots as a free agent to play for the Denver Broncos is that he did not like his former coach Bill Belichick because he has total control of the players by telling them not to speak in a way that will get them kicked off the team for not playing the Patriot Way and he did not like being chewed out by his coach in front of his players. He said is happy starting a new career in Denver. That is true about hatred about people being different. I figured I did not belong with Word Girl Wiki and decided to work here and I am happy.
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xaroleht Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
ITs truly sad that people aren't smart enough yet not get hung up on such petty things as hatred or intolerance, but it is what it is... As the band xtc says " don't let the loveless ones sell you a world wrapped in grey" just continue being your self and keep good company!  :D.  One day ( when I'm a billionaire)  I'd like to start my own affordable private school and set the standard for education  not only here but around the world... I believe kids should be taught how to really love themselves as we'll as appreciate others. They should be taught how to find their passions and encouraged to follow their dreams... How to over come sadness and depression.  Second languages should be mandatory in this modern age... And respect not just for other cultures but other genders as well needs good focus.... And bottom line kids need to learn to LOVE to learn. Also I believe education should be a life long pursuit... Much more important than working!....and let's not forget exercise(in any form),also a must!!
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MarioGamer96 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
This is actually true
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LalalandMuse Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student Writer
Short but very true.
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TracyStromberg Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You speak the truth *-*
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hatsunemikufan108 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HOW DO YOU KNOW MY LIFE?!?!?!
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I like this "complete crap", actually. It's a simple yet important message.
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