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I am the shadow, and I am the light
I am the sunlight, and I am the night
I am the battle, and I am the fighter
I am the water, and I am the fire
I am a raindrop just ready to fall
I am the world, and yet…
No one at all.
I.. don't know.

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So beautiful.....
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Jan 23, 2014  Student General Artist
this inspired me to write like 3 poems, im posting them but linking yours since your's is waaaayyyy better. so yea, thought i'd tell ya. think im technically supposed to anyway. well, thanks for another inspirational poem. ^-^
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TempestasRex Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

When I read this it makes me think of God, and also makes me feel a little sad for him.

 

I enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.

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pctomgirl Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I applaud you...good job :)
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Gwenvar Jul 27, 2013   General Artist
Very good and dynamic. But I think the 3rd line breaks the flow: it would be better if the 3rd and 4th lines would be swapped (considering the flow, but for the writing to make sense maybe not XD).
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I love this! Well done! Hug 
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taangfioleegirl Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this but please be my friend
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UnderHisWing Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this!!!
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sumarlegur Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awful.
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MikkiMarie Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, well thanks anyway :P
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