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I am the shadow, and I am the light
I am the sunlight, and I am the night
I am the battle, and I am the fighter
I am the water, and I am the fire
I am a raindrop just ready to fall
I am the world, and yet…
No one at all.
I.. don't know.

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unaveragejo3 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
I love the concept that you can be everything yet nothing because being a person is all that all us little humans with our small minds really care about.
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Mallowny Featured By Owner May 6, 2015
Simple words, simple rhymes, yet  so brilliantly written all together. I simply love it :)
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IMAFTF Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist
This poem seems to have so much more meaning to it then what I already see in it. 
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kokikoki456 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
So beautiful.....
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student General Artist
this inspired me to write like 3 poems, im posting them but linking yours since your's is waaaayyyy better. so yea, thought i'd tell ya. think im technically supposed to anyway. well, thanks for another inspirational poem. ^-^
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TempestasRex Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

When I read this it makes me think of God, and also makes me feel a little sad for him.

 

I enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.

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pctomgirl Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I applaud you...good job :)
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Gwenvar Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013   General Artist
Very good and dynamic. But I think the 3rd line breaks the flow: it would be better if the 3rd and 4th lines would be swapped (considering the flow, but for the writing to make sense maybe not XD).
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HetaliaLover379 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
I love this! Well done! Hug 
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taangfioleegirl Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this but please be my friend
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UnderHisWing Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this!!!
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sumarlegur Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awful.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, well thanks anyway :P
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prokopsm Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Beautiful!
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RandomRadish7 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just so beautiful!!! :happycry: Don't think you're weird for making this :la: it's amazing! I love it! (Sorry, now I'm being weird :)) Everyone is equal, but we're all different. It's called personality. No one's exactly alike. But yet if you know someone, you might not really know them truly. Though we may seem important and big, there's billions of others in the world so we're probably not as huge as we think.
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LalalandMuse Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Writer
Wow....This is so true. It's funny how in a world of billions, we all manage to be unique.
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:iconmadmarks:
MADmarks Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Truth lies in paradox.
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lightbleueyes Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Awesome!
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CAPTAIN-CHETO Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am the comment, and I am the favourites ;)
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:iconforeverforum:
foreverforum Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I AM THE TABLE!!!

— James Hetfield
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StevenCojo Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess by just picking words and putting them in antithesis in a sort of symmetry is poetry nowadays...well, anyways, congrats for the simplicity, it reminds me of the ones my little sister used make...
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IceCrystall Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Love
It
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:iconskutchi:
Skutchi Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
Does that make sense, I can't really get it..
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:iconjustinjps:
JustinJPS Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
Sounds like a good description of god there :)
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SeiRyuSeijin Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You stumped my AP English teacher, so kudos to you![link]
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samuelquenton Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
that is fun to read
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:iconjackcaliber:
JackCaliber Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
I am BATMAN! >:(
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moonlightshines9467 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
I really like this one! I don't really have any other words for it, but...it's really good :D
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xtinyheartx Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
whoa sounds like a riddle or something!! really cool!
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Kakaider Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
its a wonderful work but sad here read this if you would v.v
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marchesme Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So simple, yet so true and powerful... :)
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SuicideParker Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The story of my life.
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liznixXbakura Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O_O this is brilliant.
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syforceHUn Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW this is so beautyful, i just tried to translate it,
as a mirror translation

'Én vagyok az árnyék, és én vagyok a fény
Én vagyok a napfény, és én vagyok az éj
Én vagyok a csata, és én vagyok a harcos
Én vagyok a víz, és én vagyok a Tűz
Én egy vízcsepp vagyok csak aki kész, hogy lezuhanjon
Én vagyok a világ, és mégis...
A világon senki.'

And my rhyme translation:

'Árny vagyok, s egyben fény
Napsugár és este vagyok én
Harc vagyok, s annak Bújtója
Én vagyok a víz, s a tűz gyújtója
Vízcsepp vagyok csupán, ki kész leesni
Én vagyok a világ, de mégis...
Az ég világon senki.'

I love your work =3 I hope You like my translation too ;)
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Riyria-girl Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
LOVE THIS FOREVER! its is everything anyone could feel, yet very personal in many ways!
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imimad Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
me like it !! u r si good girl you should write more
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Spiiiidy Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's .... very deep. Thanks.
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LanaT35 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
Makes me sad, but that's cause I don't understand the last line, pretty awesome though. You make me wish writing poetry. :-)
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AnaInTheStars Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Professional Writer
wow, love the ending...very cool. Short and sweet :)
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SmileAtYourOwnRisk Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
Damn. I really like this one. Nice work! :)
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just-for-giggles Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
very beautiful, I love it. it's very meaningful(:
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AkiLover93 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I like this. Very good and suprising ending :)
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Cherry-Chipmunk59 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
why are poems called "I AM" so damn cool?
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Jelakennedy Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Battle and fighter. Favorite part. Great poem.
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blacky2o1 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student General Artist
reminds me of FMA
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Sumerechnaia Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
like it so much!!!
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raikuroneko Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love that part ~~
I am the world, and yet…
No one at all.
niceeee
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Suphyx Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yin and Yang- the center point of the human being. Well written.
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dragonsnmoonbeams Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student Writer
[link] like this! simple and elegant.
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Puppyeyes427 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very good, my friend. Amazing, that is what this is. Almost like the Uni:verse has touched your Soul. Keep on.
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