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I am the shadow, and I am the light
I am the sunlight, and I am the night
I am the battle, and I am the fighter
I am the water, and I am the fire
I am a raindrop just ready to fall
I am the world, and yet…
No one at all.
I.. don't know.

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IMAFTF Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist
This poem seems to have so much more meaning to it then what I already see in it. 
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kokikoki456 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
So beautiful.....
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student General Artist
this inspired me to write like 3 poems, im posting them but linking yours since your's is waaaayyyy better. so yea, thought i'd tell ya. think im technically supposed to anyway. well, thanks for another inspirational poem. ^-^
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TempestasRex Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

When I read this it makes me think of God, and also makes me feel a little sad for him.

 

I enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.

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pctomgirl Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I applaud you...good job :)
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Gwenvar Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013   General Artist
Very good and dynamic. But I think the 3rd line breaks the flow: it would be better if the 3rd and 4th lines would be swapped (considering the flow, but for the writing to make sense maybe not XD).
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HetaliaLover379 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
I love this! Well done! Hug 
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taangfioleegirl Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this but please be my friend
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UnderHisWing Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this!!!
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sumarlegur Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awful.
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