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I slid the blade across my wrist
Once
Twice
Again and again.

Maybe I’m an emotional freak.

I cause fights and arguments
Over
And over
Again.

Maybe I’m a troublemaker.

I use make up to make myself seem
Better
And…
Prettier.

Maybe I’m girly.

I complain about things
Even when sometimes
They’re not
That
Bad.

Maybe I’m an attention seeker.

I fall under so many
Stereotypes.

So maybe I am a label.

Or maybe
I’m just me.
Maybe?

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Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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AnimePicasso Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Student Writer
so pretty
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dahmii Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
- ~taliatheotaku, *MikkiMarie
noone shopuld say things like that... if its constuctive critisism im fine... but saying u should quit what helps u and others... not ok... i have bi polar myself.. and alot of your stuff i can relate to... i havent had a chance to put any of my stuff up... but once i do .. i hope you will check it out
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
You're just you. Let the world put all the labels it wants. It won't change who you are. Don't be afraid to be yourself. I used to be and that brought me nothing but sadness.
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taliatheotaku Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ugh, that deviant saying you shouldn't write poetry anymore... Disgusting!
I think you're great! Very relateable and your stuff is really good!
I've been reading alot of your stuff ;A; you rock.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you! <3
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ejmasturej Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Maybe you should consider not writing poetry anymore.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Errmaaahhuuuhh nah :3 Thank you! :D
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Pretty-Little-Demon Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this isn't very original. you should try and word it in a more interesting way and try to make it flow better, because it's bland and boring to look at right now.
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:iconkillerlord123:
killerlord123 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
Every poet has a way. Hers is just different from yours.
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