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I slid the blade across my wrist
Once
Twice
Again and again.

Maybe I’m an emotional freak.

I cause fights and arguments
Over
And over
Again.

Maybe I’m a troublemaker.

I use make up to make myself seem
Better
And…
Prettier.

Maybe I’m girly.

I complain about things
Even when sometimes
They’re not
That
Bad.

Maybe I’m an attention seeker.

I fall under so many
Stereotypes.

So maybe I am a label.

Or maybe
I’m just me.
Maybe?

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Melodygirl74 Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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AnimePicasso Jun 1, 2013  Student Writer
so pretty
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dahmii May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
- ~taliatheotaku, *MikkiMarie
noone shopuld say things like that... if its constuctive critisism im fine... but saying u should quit what helps u and others... not ok... i have bi polar myself.. and alot of your stuff i can relate to... i havent had a chance to put any of my stuff up... but once i do .. i hope you will check it out
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:iconkillerlord123:
You're just you. Let the world put all the labels it wants. It won't change who you are. Don't be afraid to be yourself. I used to be and that brought me nothing but sadness.
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:icontaliatheotaku:
taliatheotaku May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ugh, that deviant saying you shouldn't write poetry anymore... Disgusting!
I think you're great! Very relateable and your stuff is really good!
I've been reading alot of your stuff ;A; you rock.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you! <3
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:iconejmasturej:
Maybe you should consider not writing poetry anymore.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Errmaaahhuuuhh nah :3 Thank you! :D
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Pretty-Little-Demon Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this isn't very original. you should try and word it in a more interesting way and try to make it flow better, because it's bland and boring to look at right now.
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:iconkillerlord123:
Every poet has a way. Hers is just different from yours.
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