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I slid the blade across my wrist
Once
Twice
Again and again.

Maybe I’m an emotional freak.

I cause fights and arguments
Over
And over
Again.

Maybe I’m a troublemaker.

I use make up to make myself seem
Better
And…
Prettier.

Maybe I’m girly.

I complain about things
Even when sometimes
They’re not
That
Bad.

Maybe I’m an attention seeker.

I fall under so many
Stereotypes.

So maybe I am a label.

Or maybe
I’m just me.
Maybe?

Comments please, and critiques :)
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:iconmelodygirl74:
Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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AnimePicasso Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Student Writer
so pretty
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dahmii Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
- ~taliatheotaku, *MikkiMarie
noone shopuld say things like that... if its constuctive critisism im fine... but saying u should quit what helps u and others... not ok... i have bi polar myself.. and alot of your stuff i can relate to... i havent had a chance to put any of my stuff up... but once i do .. i hope you will check it out
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
You're just you. Let the world put all the labels it wants. It won't change who you are. Don't be afraid to be yourself. I used to be and that brought me nothing but sadness.
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taliatheotaku Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ugh, that deviant saying you shouldn't write poetry anymore... Disgusting!
I think you're great! Very relateable and your stuff is really good!
I've been reading alot of your stuff ;A; you rock.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you! <3
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:iconejmasturej:
ejmasturej Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Maybe you should consider not writing poetry anymore.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Errmaaahhuuuhh nah :3 Thank you! :D
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Pretty-Little-Demon Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this isn't very original. you should try and word it in a more interesting way and try to make it flow better, because it's bland and boring to look at right now.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Every poet has a way. Hers is just different from yours.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well thanks for the opinion <3
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T0KIOHOT3l Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know I've mentioned this before to you, but you seriously need to put trigger warnings on things like this!
The first line in itself is potentially very triggering. Please, for the sake of everyone else, put trigger warnings on your work!
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't think this was triggering.. my apologies :/
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:icont0kiohot3l:
T0KIOHOT3l Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's okay, but seriously, you do need to put trigger warnings on your work!
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:iconmelanie-sama:
Melanie-sama Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Artist
Apart from the slitting, that's basically me.
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:iconm-e-o-w-l-a-c-e:
m-e-o-w-l-a-c-e Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A lot of people are labels
A lot of people aren't
I, on the other hand, am forever done with seeing this kind of stuff on the front page! :la:
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YAY for unoriginal-ness! :D
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:iconm-e-o-w-l-a-c-e:
m-e-o-w-l-a-c-e Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm the queen of being unoriginal e_o
You should see my characters.
Unintentional almost absolute copies of some of my friends' characters...

But really I am SO tired of seeing this stuff on here
It's like everybody has a disorder now, and sadness is the new trend. adksmdwiadnsamln

//clings to my anchors, feathers, sparkles, and owl city music
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
im sorry D: I really do have a disorder though. i don't do it 'cause it's cool =P
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:iconm-e-o-w-l-a-c-e:
m-e-o-w-l-a-c-e Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
most people srsly need to chill out sighs



((IM WAITING FOR THE INSANE PEOPLE WHO LOVE YOU TO DEATH TO COME AND TACKLE MY COMMENTS AND CALL ME A BAGFULL OF FEMALE DOGS))
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, its just your opinion :) I don't think your anything bad for it.
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:iconm-e-o-w-l-a-c-e:
m-e-o-w-l-a-c-e Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Most people beg to differ.
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Awesome. That is all.
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cosartmic Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good. Sometimes we all fall under these 'labels' and we don't mean to. We try to get away from them, but they chase after us.
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Sakarra Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student General Artist
So true.
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:iconcosartmic:
cosartmic Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was feeling creative and those words spilled out. I'm glad I don't sound like an idiot!
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! <3
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:iconcosartmic:
cosartmic Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! <3
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:iconshikion:
Shikion Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
*Fudge, I say "really" a lot. _ _ ;; I apologize.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe it's okay :3
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Shikion Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
This is really, really good. To be honest, I feel as if this is what teenagers go through in life, really. Trying to find themselves, really. That's what adolescence is all about, no? ^_^ This piece really does speak and after asking questions, getting them answered yet at the same time coming up with more questions, I can only come under the conclusion that we will never know our true selves-- and maybe that's why we, as individuals, fall under so many labels, while other people other than us usually just classify each of us as one, since it's easier and that's the side of each of us they usually see. I remember that someone told me that even married couples find out new things about each other every day, and that we will never find our true selves, considering we develop and change every day. I may be babbling and ranting on and on about this, but I couldn't help but do so. ^_^;; Getting back to the poem, this is really, really good, and I loved reading and interpreting it. :3
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, i appreciate the rant :D Thank you! <3
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Riot-Girl16 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   Writer
I love this. It really speaks to me. Good work, it's very touching. :hug:
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! <3
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:iconriot-girl16:
Riot-Girl16 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   Writer
No problem!! Just keep writing. You have such a beautiful talent for it. :heart:
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