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Slide the blade across your wrist.
Again.
Again.
Again.
Stop.
"Doesn't it hurt?"
I can't feel anything.
"A little."

Punch your own stomach.
Harder.
Harder.
Does it hurt yet?
Yes.
Keep going.
"Why do you do that?"
The pain makes me feel alive.
"I don't know."

Stare.
Cry.
Scream.
Stop.
Keep staring.
"What's wrong with you?"
I'm dead inside.
"Nothing."

"Emotional freak."
I'm just depressed.
"Sorry."

Stare at your arms.
Your stomach.
Your waist.
Your thighs.
"What are you doing?"
I'm ugly.
"Never mind."

"Attention seeker."
I just have low self esteem.
"I'm sorry."

Cuts.
Scars.
Tears.
Emotions.

"Emo."
"Scene girl."
"Psycho."

I'm just human.

I'm just me.
I dunno. Wrote it really fast. O_O
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Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
how do you do that? how do you go into my brain and take what happens to me and put into your poetry? how?
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jessi-dragon-rider Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That´s so great 
and true !
Love it !
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Honeysaber Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
its not very good
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thats okay :)
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EeveeTree Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Oh gosh, the "Attention Seeker". Whenever I hear/see someone say that, I get so mad.

Self-hurt, in my opinion, is a lot like drugs/alcoholism. It becomes an addiction. It becomes the only way to "calm down" or "feel better". And unless you've been in that situation, you just can't really understand what it's like.
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LadyXaim Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
I kind of disagree with that *please dont get mad!!* only the not being in the situation part. I haven't been but I've talked to enough people who have to understand. And I've been in a situation where I thought about it a lot and considered it. So, though I've never done it, I understand.

Also, amazing poem, you've really captured the way most people respond to the things that people say. Bang up job :)
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EeveeTree Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
That's good that you can understand :) I guess there are people that can... just most of the people I know who haven't ever harmed themselves scorn those who have and don't seem to understand it at all.
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LadyXaim Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
Yeah, i know those people too :/ its a shame but you know how people can be
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed O_O thank you!
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RenosGirl77 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Damn those stereotypical bastards. They say stuff like that because they're ignorant. There is no shame in being yourself, because being like that's the only way you will ever find people like you. Don't give up!! :)
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