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Slide the blade across your wrist.
Again.
Again.
Again.
Stop.
"Doesn't it hurt?"
I can't feel anything.
"A little."

Punch your own stomach.
Harder.
Harder.
Does it hurt yet?
Yes.
Keep going.
"Why do you do that?"
The pain makes me feel alive.
"I don't know."

Stare.
Cry.
Scream.
Stop.
Keep staring.
"What's wrong with you?"
I'm dead inside.
"Nothing."

"Emotional freak."
I'm just depressed.
"Sorry."

Stare at your arms.
Your stomach.
Your waist.
Your thighs.
"What are you doing?"
I'm ugly.
"Never mind."

"Attention seeker."
I just have low self esteem.
"I'm sorry."

Cuts.
Scars.
Tears.
Emotions.

"Emo."
"Scene girl."
"Psycho."

I'm just human.

I'm just me.
reposting an old poem of mine. posted it a while back and decided to do it again, this time with over 100 more watchers. :)
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When I started reading this, I had just loges on and it was the first thing there, it really intrigued me and so I clicked on it and it changed my impact on how I see others that are like this, and that it's jut who they are and because they express them selves, they end up getting hurt, from either themselves or others. This really is an amazing poem and it shoots to your brain to make you think, "hey, maybe that emo kid isn't as bad as we really think they are." And that's what I thought. I love this so much, you truly are talented with your words.
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(( This is an amazing poem, in my opinion. When I read it, I can tell that when you wrote this, actual feelings were put into it, you were actually feeling something. I love the way you wrote it, the dialogue and your own thoughts afterwards and then your answer to the question. That's how I am; I hide the way I feel with monotone, lies, and an even face. It really strikes me and makes me feel better that I'm not the only one who does that. I felt strange being the only one who told lies to hide the way I felt and still feel... I smile and pretend nothing's wrong, thank you for writing this amazing poem and keep up the great work! ))
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BurningFlameMC Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
:D
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CrustyNoodle Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
WRISTS ARE FOR BRACELETS NOT FOR CUTTING 
If you have depression or problem, seek for help or do something to distract yourself from cutting, like drawing, listening to songs, if all else fails... LOOK FOR REAL HELP LIKE PSYCHOLOGIST AND COUNSELLORS!!!
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MolotovGTM Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have been featured here Link :rose:
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Mariaactually Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
My biggest feat is for someone to see my scars, so I always cover them up until they grow back
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Katie-Venerelli Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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Twisted-Curiosity Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student
Wow. Strong.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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MAziMadi1234 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
omg i love this :0 :D
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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deadhope4ever Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your a great poet I can feel the pain in this from my own experiences
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