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I can feel the shadows taking thoughts from deep inside
I can feel their poison sinking far into my mind
I can hear the little girl, so innocent, so sweet
I can taste the venom in the few things I do eat
I can hear them calling me, my name upon their tongues
I can feel them all around me, filling up my lungs
I can feel their every breath, so warm upon my skin
I can feel their vicious souls appearing from within
I can feel it, I can hear it, right in front of me
Why do you ignore it? You are not the one who sees…
about my disorder. comments?
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Bemari Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
Well written with good rhyming about a serious matter.
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HaruBells Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't want to sound insensitive, because I'm really just curious. What disorder is this?

Wonderful poem though; I don't like reading about disorders on informational sites or anything like that, because I'd rather hear it from somebody that actually has the disorder.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have biploar disorder with psychotic features :)
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HaruBells Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh wow.
I have ADD and paranoid personality disorder.
Along with various phobias.

It's tough being crazy.
(But life's more fun this way! :D)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry!
But yes it is!
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HaruBells Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your poems are fantastic :) It's hard to believe you are so young!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thanks <3
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Eredev Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Chilling and creepy, yet beautifully done :)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh thanks ^_^
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Eredev Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
No problem :D
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