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‎"Are you okay?"
No. I'm dying. I have to push myself to wake up in the morning, and when I finally do, I want to go back to sleep. Even my best dreams are becoming nightmares. I can't taste food, I can't stand the things I used to love. I'm breaking. I'm fading. I'm dying.
"I'm fine."
something real quick i wrote...
yeah.
Thanks for reading :)
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zeezeeazc123 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When someone says they're "fine", one can't assume they are actually "fine".... "fine" has become one of those words that is just used for a response, not something meaningful.
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koreauchiha Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
I think this describes most people, at least somehow.
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013   Writer
i like eeet!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ya!
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AvengerKitty12 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Know the feeling, dude.
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KaRinaDeviantartist Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this just spoke to me thank u for creating this it helped me to realize how i feel
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NSOrg Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
lovely one!
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Monochrome-Kitten Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Sums up how I've felt for the past few months in a nutshell. Great work. You express so much emotion in short pieces like these, that's difficult to do.
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Plakadak Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Awesome <33
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Cklovingston Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
Ohhh, I love it! ^___^ I read it.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thaaank you :3
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DancingShadowLeaves Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I felt that way most of the time over the last few months. You pretty much hit it right on the head. Good job! :)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a ton ^.^
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DancingShadowLeaves Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :)
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