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"Are you okay?"
That's all they say.
And I leave behind
These words in my mind.
I'm broken, I'm dying.
Inside, I'm crying.
There are wounds beneath my skin.
There are trials I face within.
There are things I just can't say.
There are people I must betray.
Beneath a smile, I feel pain.
Behind the sun, there's always a little rain.
And beneath these words I hold in my head...
There's always the thing I say instead.
I leave the truth behind..
So when they say, "are you okay?"
I always say, "I'm fine."
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zhalia103 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Writer
I completely understand how you feel and I'm sure that a number of other people do to. Thanks for sharing your feelings!
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Maple-and-sunflowers Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I don't understand, when people ask if I'm okay, I'm usually angry or I'm crying, yet when I cry, they can somehow never see me cry, and they actually accept no for an answer, they don't even try to look at my face. Life isn't fair. Life is brutal.
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Maple-and-sunflowers Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This was wonderfully written by the way.
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theZmaster Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
I've learned how 'to make a mask' as I call it also
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LanaT35 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
If you had a book, I would really enjoy reading your poetry. :-) They are sad, but they make me feel better and less alone in my own feelings.
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emmabeirsack Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
Awww I is crying its the story of my life
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Super-Neko-chan Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!
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Super-Neko-chan Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you are so welcome, darling :D
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SgtSkittle Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
damn
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