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I tried.
I tried to save you,
But you kept falling.
You wanted to crash.
But I tried.

I tried.
I tried to protect you
But you kept escaping the shelter.
You wanted the disaster.
But I tried.

I tried.
I tried to keep us together.
But you kept running.
You wanted to leave me.
But I tried.

I tried.
I tried to do everything to please you.
But you didn't accept it.
You didn't notice it.
You didn't appreciate it.
You didn't love me for it.
You didn't even care.
You wanted it your way, more than you wanted me.

But I tried.
What? I dunno.
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:icondarnarn:
So often it is this way.. why? Nice Work
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ruebrooke Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
so true T_T
i love this! good work.
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TracyStromberg Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm speechless.
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Lily-Lily-L Jun 28, 2013  Student Writer
Wow. That's really amazing, you have a lot of talent! Keep on doing it :giggle: .
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Cookiemonster-chan Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You really are talented .
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:iconryka-the-fallen:
i could see him trying, and hated myself a little for being so selfish
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:iconrunswithbooks:
This is amazing. Been there.

On this line you either forgot a period, or forgot to make the subsequent "But" lowercase: "I tried to protect you".
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:iconhoneywolfrin:
T.T this describes my life at the moment... I try SO HARD...
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pinkyghuman Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. I feel the same way you do.
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