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If you have ever faked a smile
Slit your wrist
Cried yourself to sleep
Wished yourself gone
Chased a dream (and lost it)
Ended up in a nightmare…

Broken down
Turned away from your “friends”
Been bullied
Been stereotyped
Tortured yourself over an error
Hated yourself…

Wished,
Dreamed,
Lost,
Died inside,
Feared.

If you are a victim…

Remember to stay strong.
Because you’re only a survivor
If you
NEVER
Give
Up.
I am so sorry if this in some way offends anyone. I don't know why it would, but I'm just saying before someone freaks out on me. XD

YOU'RE ALL BEAUTIFUL. I LOVE YOU GUYS, AND NEVER GIVE UP! <3

Remember to check out my facebook [link] for more poetry, for photos, or just to chat <3 I love you all.
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PoisonAzalea Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  New member Student Writer
I have been feeling depressed for a long time but no one even cares and they just laugh like,"stop being such a crybaby"

This is just beautiful
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erinkirland-mulby Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that stereotyped line cut right right through my feels.

(I'm German with blonde hair and blue eyes and an accent. I was on a foreign exchange program to England and every 5 seconds it was NAZI or RACIST in my face. I was in 5th grade)


BUT YOU GET A FAVE
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tsubaki-nanaseR08 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014   Artist
this might be the thing that i need to hear at this moment
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TheAwkwardFangirl Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:huggles: 
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Leonardogirl4eve Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
I feel like this time  to time.
My life sucks.Waaaah!  
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pokemonsonic345 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Before: I'm not going to cry this time

After: :iconsobbingplz: Dammit.
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CrystalChell Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Before: Don't cry when you read this...
After: Damn it :tears:
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EmoXDancer Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh god I'm crying over this and a lot of your poems
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yorgash Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
If you are a victim...
Stop calling yourself a victim!

For every faked smile shows your consideration,
Unfulfilled dreams let you have new ones;
For every friend lost was not a friend for you,
You stand above bullies and stereotypes;
For every errors you made you realized your weakness,
And hated your current self while striving to become better.

And for every night when you cried yourself to sleep
After slitting your wrist, and wishing you'd be gone,
You get up the next moring and stood strong, with
Wishes and desires in your heart stronger than fear;

And every coming morning proving
This World didn't swallow you.

A proof you're not a victim - a victor!
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EbonyStar8600 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think I've fainted. Waaaah! Clap  Beautiful, as always.

-EbonyStar
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superninja98 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
this describes my life......

you got it right nicely done
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Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
but how to stay strong when youre strength is already gone? when the only thing that keeps you here is the lack of items to kill yourself with?
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zhalia103 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Student Writer
because there is still at least one person out there in the world that cares about you...
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Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ya..... There is......
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zhalia103 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Writer
exactly
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Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thx.....
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ForgottenFears Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
Beautiful and inspiring, as always.
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WaffleGamer Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Writer
this is  beautiful piece ^^
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michellecota Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ima cry this is perfect in every way :,)
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FamiliarPossessedBek Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
I should really tac a copy of this on my bedroom wall....to serve as a reminder....


Anyhow, beautiful piece of work! (3
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vlancii Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
If I didn't know any better, I'd say you wrote that about me....
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:iconbarryfrommars:
BarryFromMars Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This XTC song is relevant to this page:

www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZS7JTm…
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EerieWhisper Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing!
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pctomgirl Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I wish I could give you a high five Heart 
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TracyStromberg Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is making me cry! Waaaah! 
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Red-Fox14 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm always feeling like just giving up.  Sometimes, I'm not sure why I don't.  Then I find things like this, and they always manage to lift my spirits a bit.  Thank you.
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sockzrocker Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My sis did give up....
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Kherunnissa101 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Aww don't feel sad.
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Arden-Crystal Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Writer
Never is just a word
"I'll never forget."
"I won't remember. Never ever."
"Never go with strangers."

To you, that is.
To me, it's otherwise. 

"Never again will I trust."
"Be your friend? Never, loser!"
"Never give up, right?"
"Don't say never, Crys, it'll get better."

It's final words
It's hateful words
It's sympathetic words
It's hopeful words

Do you get it now?
Never means never
It's the biggest word there

Never is

Finality
Hopefulness
Sympathy
Hate
Blood
Laugter

Me 
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Rocxann123 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Student Writer
How long will "Never" Last? 
When will you "Never" cry again?
When will you "Never" be bullied again? 
How long will "Never" last? 
 
"Never will i cry again"
"Never will I let myself be bullied  again"
"Never will I hold this promise" 
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Arden-Crystal Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Student Writer
:)
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Rocxann123 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Student Writer
Glad you liked it :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconarden-crystal:
Arden-Crystal Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student Writer
I'm just glad you noticed my poem and commented on it. :D
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Rocxann123 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student Writer
^^ you should post it on your page it's  wonderful!!!
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Arden-Crystal Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student Writer
I guess...:)
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Rocxann123 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student Writer
You SHOULD IT"S lovly!!!
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dreyhannah Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I like this. :)
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Luna2468 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice
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Jaksonthefox Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student General Artist
I... I feel like using a statement that goes along with the word, "Never" feels like a hypocritical thing to say. I only say this because "Never give up!" is something that is pretty much improbable. It's a good motto, but to me it feels like, "Never say never."
Brilliant work though. Very well done.
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BarryFromMars Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
"Never say Never" Does sound contradictory.

I think "Always keep going in life" Is a bit more colored and descriptive.
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AkatsukiLoverXDX3 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
....I love this poem too...<3
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Jesserfly Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, this helps me know I have hope. :)
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TheLittleLocket Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ survivors to the end!
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Inspiring, thank you for writing this! :heart:
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gothdra Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thoughtful and with impact. Love it! <3
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The only one of those I've never done is slit my wrist. For three years I suffered from severe depression and my parents didn't even notice. I put on a fašade for my friends and the teachers just thought I was lazy. Every week I'd cry myself to sleep at least four times. I still fall back into some of the dark thoughts when I'm left alone. But I have people who love me, and would really miss me if I were to disappear, so I have a reason to fight through the shit I get almost every day. I only wish I knew how much better it would get as I went through it. It would have stopped a lot of the pain.

Beautifully written, the lack of rhyme strengthens the message. Keep writing. It's open displays of these emotions that can help those suffering.
Thank you
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DaHanci Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:(
*hugs*
*squeezes*
Feel any better? :)
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:iconbitter-sweet-tragedy:
Thank you. I'll survive. I always do.
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DeviantArtist14 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student General Artist
such a wonderful poem i just kept going down the lines of words and was like o-o is she like stalking me through my window? xD great poem, very powerful :)
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Eunyeou Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Pretty much describes how I used to be until last year when I went with the 'fuck it all' option. I still deal with so-called friends, but now that I'm making more friends I don't feel bad about leaving those behind that were never really friends to begin with. (That makes sense right o-o?)

It feels good to not fully give up ^^ I have my moments still but, now I have a hello kitty pillow to hug until I feel better.
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