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I like to talk to my best friends
Whenever i'm feeling down.
A precious lick of happiness
From their sweet and lovely sound.
I cry the tears of melancholy
Upon their reliable shoulders
A kiss among my scars
As the night grows colder.
A feeling of pure pulchritude
As our friendship does prove true
Yes, i confide in my best friend

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If only you could hear them, too.
THANK YOU :iconreniraiero: FOR THE IDEA!! :)
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ToasterLove Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sent chills down my spine.
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HerMoony Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is perfect (: Thank you for writing this
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013   Writer
i love this one
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GoldenWingedAngel Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I… I can't explain how this makes me feel…
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NorwegianAnime Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
This is truly amazing, I was bullied every day when i was younger, but as time went i gained friends and they helped me build up my confidence again. Without them i dont know if i would be here today
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LalalandMuse Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Writer
I love the meaning in this so much. I can relate to the feeling of being my own best friend sometimes.
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautifully written, great poem from a talented poet
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Bronypeople Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
That's amazing.
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allyamezola Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have a song titled In My Mind, it's weird how the meanings of both are so different, but ya this is fantastic :D
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:iconrainbowzprinklez2017:
This is perfect!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
My imaginary friends and yours should meet. Mine are fine, but they need some discipline. Yours sound like great people.
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ReniraIero Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my gosh I love this so much!!!!
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad ^_^
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:iconreniraiero:
ReniraIero Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad I could give you the idea for something so awesome!!!
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Ru1n3d Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, that's my favourite of all your poems so far :)
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gregoryma Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
the "if only you could hear them, too." part makes me think of imaginary friends XD :meow:
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KandiKane1719 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist
You know this reminds me of something........



A good friend will give you a shoulder to cry on
A best friend will have a shovel to hurt however made you cry
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MAziMadi1234 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
i like dis :)
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Cwolf0615 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

You are so good at putting things into words! I can never figure out how to write things like this down, I've tried... but can't. :no:

 It feels like this poem is about me. :lol:

I love when poems are like that. :squee:

Great job! :icongreatjobplz:

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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my god! That's how my friends feel about me! X3
Really nice peom!
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BloodieIce Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
Awesome :3
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ButtercupZirka Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
:icongoodjobplz:
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