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There sits the girl with the things in her eyes
Monsters, destruction, and sweet butterflies
Hopscotch and daisies, surrounded by screams
Beautiful dresses now torn at the seams
Crayons and paintbrushes, villains and grins
Young, gladsome innocence, hatred and sins
Little red houses on roads left to fade
Gorgeous moonlight shining off of the blade
Blood pouring out as she cries her own name
Knowing she's forced to take each bit of blame
She could have stopped it and left it behind
All of these things in her troubled young mind
She could have saved them if she dared to try
Rather, though, she left herself there to die.
Now, others watch as she sits on the ground
Keeping their distance and letting her drown
In her own worries and things she won't tell
Waiting for her mind to kill her as well…
I posted this before, twice i think. But i decided to post it again 'cause i love it :3
comment and i promise to respond! :)
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pancake84 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awww :( it sounds like she was being abused, so the more she died within her self, the more it numbed the outer pain.
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LanaT35 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
I didn't know the sadness was a ratting. Love for your poem. Sadness for how it makes me feel.
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LanaT35 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
Wow. This makes me worry about you. Is this just a poem or is it about you?
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ReniraIero Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O.O
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adxlynn Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't describe it....but I know that I like this poem.
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Twisted-Curiosity Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student
Last line= Me
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Zbee8 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student General Artist
is it wrong that i relate?
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No way is that wrong! <3 Thank you!
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Zbee8 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student General Artist
hahahhaha welcome
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inside-our-mind Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:(
What's sad is that this reminds me of one of my friends...
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