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In my head,
The birds that fly above me
Are the dragons of my kingdom.

In my head,
Cats and dogs are lions and wolves,
And my fish is a sea monster.

In my head,
My pen is a sword,
And I’m fighting witches and evil men
To find my prince charming.

In my head,
Butterflies spin through the air
And fly through my bedroom windows
To whisper things in a language
That only I understand.

In my head,
There is a world other than
These black and white dreams
And these faded grey skies.

In my head,
There is a universe.

Can’t you see it, too?
FINALLY SOMETHING SOMEWHAT POETIC MAYBE O_O

About a little girl's imagination :)

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:iconmorpheus1035:
Morpheus1035 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Probably my favorite one of your poems :)
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:iconlastofthewolves:
LastoftheWolves Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Quit looking into my brain!?! XD Even if this poem was AMAZING!?!
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:iconannika-san:
Annika-san Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Writer
Yes mine is just different but yes i do see it.
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:iconkijinii:
Kijinii Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wonderful! 
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:iconimichaotheechidna:
imichaotheechidna Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I feel ya.
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do we have the same head? :P
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:iconbreathinbreathout:
breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013   Writer
me see it!!! good poem doe
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:iconreckless-insomniac:
reckless-insomniac Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
more than poetic, beautiful even haha
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:iconmidnightbiter:
Midnightbiter Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Yes. Yes i do see it. T-T
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:iconq-e-a:
Q-E-A Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant. 
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:iconnikkaliah:
Nikkaliah Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this! Well done. +fav
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:iconchapawee13:
Chapawee13 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not little anymore either, and I like to imagine I'm in my own universe. Great poem! :D
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:iconscribblydoodler:
Scribblydoodler Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not little anymore...and I still think this way at times. :happybounce:  You are fun, MikkiMarie. 
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SophieLauraWarden Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
My imagination as a kid exactly. Beautiful poem. :) 
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:iconhiivala:
hiivala Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very original!!! Good job!!! I am impressed.
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:iconamberamuawesome:
amberamuawesome Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it, but whenever I see the words "in my head" I think of the song so it distracts me from the poem. Otherwise good though :)
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:iconkitty6773:
Kitty6773 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is my imagination.
How did you know? ;)
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:iconlunaintegrity:
LunaIntegrity Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing!
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:iconnekopinkshooter:
NekoPinkShooter Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Just amazing! :iconhappycryplz: It really describes the imagination! ^W^
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SupremeYa Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love this :) perfectly captures imagination :)
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:iconlalalandmuse:
LalalandMuse Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Writer
This is fantastic :) The words sounds like they could be song lyrics.
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:iconpaul1820:
paul1820 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
MARVELOUS!!
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:iconawesomeduskangel:
AwesomeDuskAngel Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist
AMAZING :D
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:iconmrs-saxobeat:
Mrs-SaxoBeat Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful and creative <3 :iconclapplz:
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:iconchibimita:
Chibimita Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student General Artist
:heart:
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rstoker2017 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student General Artist
beautiful work.  The imagination and rythem of this poem is just amazing. Truly an inspiration. Keep up the fantastic work! :) (Smile) 
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:icontarzok:
Tarzok Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
:clap::clap::clap:
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WWWIIWillowIIWWW Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
This is Tard bouncy flip really cool!
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:iconsomerrocks:
somerrocks Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow this sounds a lot like something that goes on in  my head...heh but my pet cat is a eevee and ones an alien and ones a grumpy dragon and ones a tiny little adowable tiger ninja!.....X3 
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ShoujikoBani Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, this is awesome ^^ I can really relate!
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:iconph3nf1x:
PH3NF1X Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is awesome. :thumbsup: :eager:
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:iconph3nf1x:
PH3NF1X Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:thumbsup:     --       :eager:   *
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Acaciathorn Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:#1:
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:iconmaritse:
Maritse Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can really relate to this! So true, and well written!:thumbTo shy to scream :
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:iconavizo-23:
Avizo-23 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student General Artist
a little girl's imagination? then i'm little! :squee:
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:iconkandikane1719:
KandiKane1719 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist
I thought I was the only one who thinks of this
Guess I'm not alone :meow:
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Alicelisabeth Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Awesom, i love this
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followwolves Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this. Beautiful, Mikki.
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AerithEchidna4rt Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaww :) That's cute, creative, and just plain amazing!
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:iconjonsukka:
Jonsukka Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Beautiful!!! I really love it.<3

Very lovely poetry.

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We all have universes in our minds. all of them different. Yours seems nice. Mine could use more stars.
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MountainMew Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Writer
I'm amazed at how generic this is to be a kids imagination, I imagine kids are a bit more diverse than that. That's not me trying to be rude, I just feel this is an incredibly generic poem. It's simple with overused simple ideas, you should try to add a bit more flavor to it! There's nothing really wrong with it structurally, actually the set up if very nice. It simply needs some spark to make it pop out from everything else, or it simply feels like the same old cliche retold overtime. Hope that criticism helps, good luck on your next works!
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:iconcat-fanatic:
cat-fanatic Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
adorable and for once something reminds me of my past
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:iconanila73:
anila73 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Pfff, LITTLE girl's imagination?
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:icongothfoxgirl:
Gothfoxgirl Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
awwwwwwwww
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:iconmiraclechrome:
MiracleChrome Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thats a cute imagination :D
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MarioGamer96 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
This is great, nice job :)
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