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Hush, sweetie,
Do not let their judgments define you.
Do not let their hatred construct you.
Do not let their words build you.
Hush, sweetie,
Do not let your sorrow swallow you.
Do not let your pain devour you.
Do not let your loneliness change you.
Hush, sweetie,
Stop telling yourself lies,
Stop screaming in a whisper that you're
Ugly
Inside and out.
Stop telling yourself that you're
Worthless.
Stop telling yourself that you're
Broken,
And hopeless,
And damaged.

Hush, sweetie...
It's not polite to lie.
I dunno xD five minutes, just to get something out there.
Remember you're all beautiful <3 worthy of life and so much more.
Stay strong <3

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procastinator-chan Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it polite to lie of it's to makes me feel a bit better?
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sweetpeachartist12 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student General Artist
beautiful
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evettejo Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like how this one flowed. Once again, love the ending. "It's not polite to lie."
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RogersTheBull Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Totally agree with this.
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runty Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student General Artist
SO SWEET :heart: a message EVERYONE needs to hear about themselves, every day!
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longshorelevi Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
You have great potential
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student General Artist
i feel like you were speeking like right to me...
this made me cry a lil it was so accurate....

i'll try to stop...but bad habits do die hard...thanks for encouragement (your poems really do help)
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silversongwriter Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
I really like this one
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Juggaloboobear Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Student Photographer
O.O it's so true that it just hurts
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ForgottenSea Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Thanks for this piece,I love it :) It is quite encouraging :D
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RoseBean Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
Life can be tough...... Thanks for your encouragement to do the right thing. Stay Strong <3 Your piece is very touching
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XxASmallBlackRosexX Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It was very short, but I thank you so much for making this. I've been having some trouble with a girl at school and it's just been ruining my days. Your poem made me feel better, it's the thought that counts! <3
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smilinq Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is absolutely amazing ;w; Thank you so much for writing this.
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mocha-creme Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really needed that cause I feel really damn terrible right now. Thanks.
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DarkWondering Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013

This is amzing. Thank you so much; I've been looking for something like this to show my friend

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kagomegirl96 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student General Artist
This is beautiful. I actually teared up.
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Another very moving well written poem  :love:
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artimiss1238 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student General Artist
thanxs. i needed that TTwTT
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Zirems Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely!!!!
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CherrichelxD16 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Man, this was done in five minutes? this is ART! The way you wrote it was just so simple yet it fulfilled every aspect of reality in the most perfect way! So simple yet beautiful! I felt like I was reading a real poem by Maya Angelou or something! Masterpiece!Emoji Set: Applause 
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AwkwardShinigami Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is too great for words. :heart:
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RomanceFreak Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my gosh, this is so beautiful! This is the kind of poem I need to cheer me up when I feel worthless. Thanks! This is perfect!
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ptitchka Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's beautifull! :)
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Akaszik Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
I love the way you've made a point!
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ETHorrorGamer Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you, I needed this to cheer my heart up
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von19 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Writer
Oh My Gawd! This is BEAUTIFUL!
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :D It's perfectly timed! I almost cried, thank you!
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Akumu74 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Let's get married. 
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Maria-55 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really inspiring (: Today I had a bad day and this just make me feel so much better :happybounce:  You're amazing Hug 
(Sorry for my bad english xd)
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BluuButterfly Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Screaming in a whisper" that was the bit that got me. I'm very very shy, and if somethings wrong then it takes me a while to say something out loud, even though inside I'm yelling it. Every line of your writing is just so powerful and moving, and I think you've saved more than one person from suicide.
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deepanshu09 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
beautiful
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Celestial-Biohazard Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconclapplz::iconcryforeverplz:
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meerkatlover27 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Wow just indescribable <3 
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Elecisss Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I wish I could write like this.. Lovely
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LilyHeart101 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Beautiful stuff yet again. I suffer with low self esteem in my depression, so this has struck some chord. Thanks for writing. I will try to remember I am worthy of life. :) Well done.
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ItamiShinzo Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i was feeling low today and this made me feel so much better. i really needed this.

Thank You.
Pikachu Loves It Plz 
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FenrirRose Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Goosebumps :) Favorite part other than all of it: "Stop screaming in a whisper"
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koreauchiha Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
this is... actually kind of creepy, in a beautiful way.
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Rema-Alkhany Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
very nice,thanks
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TheDrowWarrior1 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
<3 I feel better now
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TLFScarheart Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
very good poem! Dark, but find a way to inspire hope!
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Diomedeez Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for your work!
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013   Writer
:'( I stared crying reading this. i really love it
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BethanyyJoelle Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Writer
Beautiful
Almost in tears, thank you <3
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CoffeeCupPup Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very nice :)
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NamieDanielle Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
Picked me right back up again
Thanks :)
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vlancii Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
A gift for words.  Now, one of my favorites!!!  Beautiful!
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. :heart: :hug:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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Demon-Snow Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful and inspiring, as well as something I think everyone needs to read.
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