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Attention seeker?
Maybe fighting for acception.
Emo?
Rather, suffering rejection...
Ugly?
Maybe breaking for direction...
Anorexic?
Perhaps dying for correction...
Fake?
Maybe hurting for affection..

So maybe before you label someone just because you don't feel a connection...
Maybe fix yourself before you point out imperfections.
truthfully I don't know if "acception" is a word.
Is it? O_O
comment please! :)
I know this one stinks... But that's okay. It has... no.. nevermind.. it's not even an original thought xD i don't know. But i'm posting it. :)
anyway yes comments!?
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it's not a very long piece. but i think that's where part of the beauty shines. it has a valid message, and an adamant point of view. i agree with the message, that one should not judge based on what they think they know, as opposed to actually knowing what that person is going through. overall, it's very well done, and the impact was well received, at least by me.
everyone has inner flaws they choose not to see in themselves, but are quick to point out in others. this touches on that too, with the last line sort of putting the whole thing in perspective. very well done.
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HetaliaLover379 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Well done, this is a true message that a lot of people need to hear :)
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ninjasinger1 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
amazing! just...wow...
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stotzie Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
to be honest i think i just about broke down crying... i have a friend in every category, friends that i heard insukt each other because they are from diffrent friend groups. but when i comes down to it they just don't understand each other. and this poem was absolutely perfect
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Why do you think this is bad? This is a message almost everyone needs to hear.
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Dickywebster Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
Labels are pointless.
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XXStigerstar Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is good
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!!
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XXStigerstar Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
XD
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   Writer
i like it!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Tank chu bro!
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Sakura-no-Josei Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Short, sweet and to the point. Like this a lot!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh thank you!
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Mariichuu Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist
This is amazing!
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!!
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Mariichuu Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist
Your welcome:)
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summerday27 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Woah. This is amazing. I'm really impressed with the rhymes. You fit it all together so perfectly. And the message is, just beautiful. :faint: :heart:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw dear, thank you <3
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summerday27 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome :aww:
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GrimdarkElusive Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
You may not think so, but this is a very amazing poem.

It breaths life - Everything about it winds together perfectly to show the picture.

And them oral...? Well, that's the best part.

Might I ask your opinion on one of my own pieces of poetry....? [link]
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yes i will! <3
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GrimdarkElusive Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Thank you. :3
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X12-1992 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
amazing :love:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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hae-ri Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Professional Photographer
Acception is a word, at least according to my dictionary. (: I don't think it's used that often and that's why people don't feel like it's a word at all. But it is, and it has the same meaning as acceptance, so no worries.
This is a good poem. I saw a similar one a while ago, but it was loooooooooooooooooooong and boring. Even though the message was clear, I just couldn't finish up that one - but this I enjoyed reading very much. It's short, it has rhythm and it has a point. Very well done.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw! thank you! :) i'm glad my little moment of inspiration was fun to read, haha. =P
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xXxNenekoxXx Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist
I adore your poetry so very very much. It never fails to touch my heart and make my very soul shiver. You're gifted.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh goodness :') thank you a bunch!
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Ani-Eimi Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:meow: I believe "acceptance" is the word you were looking for.
Otherwise, it's a good piece. ^^ Very real & easy to relate to.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i would use that if it would flow with the poem! :( But unfortunately i'm going to stick with the nonexistent word, hehe.
Thank you so much!
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emilyericson Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was really surprised to find this on the front page.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O_O this was on the front page?
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emilyericson Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yup. In the popular in the last eight hours section.
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Toxyk-Melodi Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
One: This is bloody amazing. Simple, but so true.
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Two: Acception is a word. [link]
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ooh yay! :D that's good, i don't feel like an idiot now.
Thank you soo much! <3
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Toxyk-Melodi Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha. No problem sugar. ^__^
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TheArtistyk Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very well said. Beautiful job~
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you <3
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TheArtistyk Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem~
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!! :)
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
No problem!!!
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falitna Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
One word to describe this dear: gorgeous.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh thank you :)
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your such a wonderful writer!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much!
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TiniEve Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome! :)
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leahmzapp Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ohhh, i just realized that'd kinda ruin the flow of the poem. hmm.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, that's why i used acception.. =P hmm.. i'll try to figure something out!
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leahmzapp Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is great!
i don't believe acception is a word.. but acceptance is, and that would work much better, just to help out c:
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Izza-the-Unicorn Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Photographer
THIS. IS. SO. TRUE. I agree with you 1200000000% !!!
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