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Attention seeker?
Maybe fighting for acception.
Emo?
Rather, suffering rejection...
Ugly?
Maybe breaking for direction...
Anorexic?
Perhaps dying for correction...
Fake?
Maybe hurting for affection..

So maybe before you label someone just because you don't feel a connection...
Maybe fix yourself before you point out imperfections.
truthfully I don't know if "acception" is a word.
Is it? O_O
comment please! :)
I know this one stinks... But that's okay. It has... no.. nevermind.. it's not even an original thought xD i don't know. But i'm posting it. :)
anyway yes comments!?
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it's not a very long piece. but i think that's where part of the beauty shines. it has a valid message, and an adamant point of view. i agree with the message, that one should not judge based on what they think they know, as opposed to actually knowing what that person is going through. overall, it's very well done, and the impact was well received, at least by me.
everyone has inner flaws they choose not to see in themselves, but are quick to point out in others. this touches on that too, with the last line sort of putting the whole thing in perspective. very well done.
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:iconhetalialover379:
Well done, this is a true message that a lot of people need to hear :)
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ninjasinger1 Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
amazing! just...wow...
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:iconstotzie:
to be honest i think i just about broke down crying... i have a friend in every category, friends that i heard insukt each other because they are from diffrent friend groups. but when i comes down to it they just don't understand each other. and this poem was absolutely perfect
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:iconkillerlord123:
Why do you think this is bad? This is a message almost everyone needs to hear.
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:icondickywebster:
Labels are pointless.
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XXStigerstar Feb 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is good
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MikkiMarie Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!!
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XXStigerstar Feb 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
XD
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:iconbreathinbreathout:
i like it!
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Tank chu bro!
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