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Attention seeker?
Maybe fighting for acception.
Emo?
Rather, suffering rejection...
Ugly?
Maybe breaking for direction...
Anorexic?
Perhaps dying for correction...
Fake?
Maybe hurting for affection..

So maybe before you label someone just because you don't feel a connection...
Maybe fix yourself before you point out imperfections.
truthfully I don't know if "acception" is a word.
Is it? O_O
comment please! :)
I know this one stinks... But that's okay. It has... no.. nevermind.. it's not even an original thought xD i don't know. But i'm posting it. :)
anyway yes comments!?
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

it's not a very long piece. but i think that's where part of the beauty shines. it has a valid message, and an adamant point of view. i agree with the message, that one should not judge based on what they think they know, as opposed to actually knowing what that person is going through. overall, it's very well done, and the impact was well received, at least by me.
everyone has inner flaws they choose not to see in themselves, but are quick to point out in others. this touches on that too, with the last line sort of putting the whole thing in perspective. very well done.