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Little red house on the corner left to fade
Tire swing swaying above a sparkling blade
Silver gown, just for the hour
Starts out sweet then you taste the sour
A little girl's heart doesn't last for long
When a little girl gone right goes horribly wrong
One little fall means blood on the breeze
Little red house with a ghost to please.
Thank you :iconrunswithbooks: for the last two lines :) Check out my facebook to end my poems!! [link]
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LalalandMuse Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Writer
A farewell to innocence.... This was sad but very poignant.
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Kevin11s-girl Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Powerful.
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad but so lovely </3 I especially love the sixth line. I <3 your poetry :) :heart:
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Another beautiful but sad poem, well written, I love it
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
I love sad endings...
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MaliceTheHedgehog Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice use of imagery and in so few lines!
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BDancinJones Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow... a nice image at first, but a not-so-nice image at the end. Way to keep us on our toes! Such a sad story... poor girl...
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