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Hear my worries, fear my cries
Dread the whispered lullabies
Drown beneath the spinning skies
Feel the truth you can't deny

Taste the blood upon your tongue
Feel the poison fill your lungs
I am she who lies among
Those who know where things belong

Feel the weapons kiss your skin
Listen to the screeching wind
See my power, watch me win…
And never fall in love again…
Something I found, I wrote it when I was ten <3 Comments are appreciated :)
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JustUsGeeks Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Writer
Diana: So many feels... I just... *Cries because of pain and these poems*
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purpletad Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student General Artist
awesome! Your writing is very inspirational. Your writing and sammylovesyoulots are my favorite writers of peotry!
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michellecota Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful :)
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MiyuRisa13 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
Woah... Ten? Seriously? You are just amazing. I love your poems :D (Big Grin) 
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WolfKidz Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
WOW you were only ten! Nice job! XD

~Rattata
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HappyLilly Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! You wrote this when you were 10? Incredible!
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very lovely :)
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Earthwitch74 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Professional Artist
very powerful
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Cwolf0615 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow! :omfg:

I can't believe you wrote that when you were ten! Thats amazing!!!

I've noticed blood on your tongue and poison in your lungs seems to be a reaccuring thing for you to write about.
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imimad Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
u r so talented
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Well girl you've got another fav from me, love it, and written when you were only ten!!! I'm going to shut myself in a darkened room and wonder how talented you are....
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhh thank you XD
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You're most welcome
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Kijinii Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You was ten? You wrote this wonderful poem as a 10 years old girl? WOW!
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Made it to front page :clap:
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Marmodre Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
When I was ten I wrote "The Demon Ying Jang hates everyone and everyone, but has a weakness for childs. He is therefore not holly devil."
This is cute and sad and good in an easy way
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TigerDemon12 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That is so cute XD
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Marmodre Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
Thank you. Indeed, it was a masterpiece still unmatched.
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TigerDemon12 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed :nod:
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You wrote this when you were ten?! Do you want to know what I wrote when I was 10? Nothing.
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
Beautiful to read.
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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
10 huh? Wow. :D
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Mysterygirl98 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
0.0 you wrote this when you were 10!?!?!?!? Wow I give you many many MANY congrats
1. Because you were an amazing writer even when you were younge
2. Because you are brave enough to post work from before you had an account
Hope you are always writing :)
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svcrid Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student Interface Designer
is there any meter in this one?
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