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Fist fights and battles in my head
I'll always remember what you said...
The day you lied.
Glass shattered all over the dirt
I'll always remember your last words...
The day you died.

I could have saved you, love.
I should have saved you, love.
I would have saved you, love...
Then maybe we could both still be
Alive.
It's not very good. But the beginning are the lyrics to a song I'm writing :) And the ending I just wrote really quickly. Hahaha. :)
Love you guys!!
Stay strong. 
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:iconbreathinbreathout:
ahhh i like it I WANNA see it when its done :)
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MikkiMarie Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It IS done now =P i'll post it some other time :)
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Pereyga Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it, especially when it says "Then maybe we could both still be alive",
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anila73 Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well I do like it. :D
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Last lines are very powerful
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:iconkillerlord123:
We can't save everyone, you know?
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BDancinJones Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is interesting and powerful, but I wonder if it might be more so were you to switch the order of the stanzas; just a thought, but to my reading it might have a more potent ending.  Also, the first stanza stands on its own, if you want to go about things that way.
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SoraLove Oct 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Really good! :) I really like the could-should part!
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LMW-Designs Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this. I have no other words for it then that.
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