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Smiley face, smiley face, can't you ever see?
So much to be sad about, so much that could be
Going wrong for everyone, going wrong for you.
Smiley face, smiley face, don't you feel it too?

Sad face, sad face, can't you ever tell?
So much could be going great, going oh so well
Sad face, sad face, can't you ever see?
Life is spend much better when your thinking thoughts of glee.

Mind, oh mind, why can't you agree?
Thinking everything at once is slowly killing me...
HAHHAH
HAHA
HA.
no.
I hate this, but i lost three watchers, i'm guessing because i keep posting just pictures of myself.
So i must post something before i lose more.
I'm.. so sorry, y'all :(
Love me? D:
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Student General Artist
That's terrible! why would anyone want to unwatch you? i was thinking of watching you just now.
You are awesome poet.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw! Thank you!!! :D
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:iconunisis-2-in-1-beauty:
Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student General Artist
You are very welcome,

For you are a star.
Both so near yet so far.
You just are who you are.

And that is how we love you!

keep on writing, beautiful girl. you're works are very inspiring and touch many hearts everywhere. Thanks for being so awesome!

~with luvs, me.

P.S.~ no homo.
P.S.-P.S.~ just in case someone thinks that.
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Twisted-Curiosity Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student
Like the poem, LUOVE the last line. Never stop the awesomeness.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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kiku----honda Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This fits my mood perfectly... thank you, I feel a bit better now! :D And yes, I still love you!
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Zmori Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Shtap thinking. :meow:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O: genius.
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:iconzmori:
Zmori Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Genius poem. ;D Thank you for sharing it! ♥
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Mission-46 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
Nice!!!
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Minako008 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student
I like it very much! The flow is just perfect.=)
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Sevijo Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Erm. I love this poem, seriously, I really like it.
But you are pretty close to leaving ME as your watcher because of your description. I am not here to give you attention, I am here to enjoy some beautiful art.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh dear.
I'm not asking for attention.
i'm just stating the fact that I really don't like this poem but i'm posting it for my watchers.
Thank you love <3
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fooxd Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice

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Chrissiemusa Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You may have lost three watchers but you earned another one with this incredible poem. Its simple and beautiful at the same time and I love your use of rhyme and the contrast of the two faces. Well cone.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks a ton <3 it means a lot :)
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Chrissiemusa Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome :)
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Tyrael0315 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the sad truth... beautiful.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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Strudel--Cutie4427 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013   Writer
That is so true... wow... That's really cool :D
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!! :D
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xIntelligentxIdiotx Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
Your poetry is beautiful. Have a new watcher :)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thanks!! <3
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xIntelligentxIdiotx Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
You're welcome :)
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Ai-ni-michita-kokoro Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's perfect
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013   Writer
this is really good!! soo much emotion make wanna cry
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AutumnPocky Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student General Artist
I cried. ;_; I dunno why really... but I did. It's beautiful... and... everything I want to say...
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww :( i'm sorry! Thank you <3
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AutumnPocky Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student General Artist
You're an amazing poet. You bend the words into such perfectly presented emotion. @.@
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ameb-love Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student General Artist
I wouldn't worry about a few followers.
More will always come. Just do your own thing. ;P
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
indeed! :D Thank you! :D
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Surrender-the-Rose Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Still love you girl, i actually really liked this one
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thanks! :D
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SomeLameStuff Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Crappy poem" huh?

I'm going to favorite this now. TAKE THAT!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O: oh no you didn't! XD
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SomeLameStuff Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I found that all writers are too hard on their own work. It's why I've rewritten my novel-in-progress at least seven times, scrapping at least 500 000 words in total... >.<

We need others to tell us that what we write IS good, and we should feel proud of ourselves for writing it. It's our fatal flaw! XD
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TheGemsProduction Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
this is really good! O_O
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O_O Thank you!!!
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TheGemsProduction Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
your welcome ^-^
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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ouch, 3 watchers?! U should ask ur friends what to write about. Then post'em. Hope u don't lose anymore.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, i had 390, now i've got 387 D: Thank you for the advice! <3
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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Any time budy! If u need more advice, just ask me.
^_^
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