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Smiley face, smiley face, can't you ever see?
So much to be sad about, so much that could be
Going wrong for everyone, going wrong for you.
Smiley face, smiley face, don't you feel it too?

Sad face, sad face, can't you ever tell?
So much could be going great, going oh so well
Sad face, sad face, can't you ever see?
Life is spend much better when your thinking thoughts of glee.

Mind, oh mind, why can't you agree?
Thinking everything at once is slowly killing me...
HAHHAH
HAHA
HA.
no.
I hate this, but i lost three watchers, i'm guessing because i keep posting just pictures of myself.
So i must post something before i lose more.
I'm.. so sorry, y'all :(
Love me? D:
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Student General Artist
That's terrible! why would anyone want to unwatch you? i was thinking of watching you just now.
You are awesome poet.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw! Thank you!!! :D
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:iconunisis-2-in-1-beauty:
Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student General Artist
You are very welcome,

For you are a star.
Both so near yet so far.
You just are who you are.

And that is how we love you!

keep on writing, beautiful girl. you're works are very inspiring and touch many hearts everywhere. Thanks for being so awesome!

~with luvs, me.

P.S.~ no homo.
P.S.-P.S.~ just in case someone thinks that.
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Twisted-Curiosity Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student
Like the poem, LUOVE the last line. Never stop the awesomeness.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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kiku----honda Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This fits my mood perfectly... thank you, I feel a bit better now! :D And yes, I still love you!
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Zmori Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Shtap thinking. :meow:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O: genius.
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Zmori Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Genius poem. ;D Thank you for sharing it! ♥
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Mission-46 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
Nice!!!
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