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Mommy, He's Lying

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Mommy, he said it, he said it was true.
Mommy, he said it, he said "I love you."
Mommy, he said it, he said it was real
Mommy, please know how to think, how i feel
Mommy, this love is the truth, it's the way
Mommy, he said it, he said it today.

Mommy, he's lying, he's lying to me
Mommy, he's telling a lie, can't you see?
Mommy, he never did mean what he said
Mommy, his voice is pounding in my head.

Mommy, he's lying, his love isn't pure
Love's a disease and he's finding the cure.
Mommy, he's lying, what else can I say...
Mommy, he hit me, he killed me today.

Mommy, he lied to me, why did he lie?
Mommy, he lied through his tears, through his cries
Mommy, his lies I just couldn't see through
Mommy, he lied to me.
What'd I ever do?
Domestic abuse :(
NOT TRUE.
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this one tells about how sometimes love hurts. as this says, it was a child warning it`s mother about this harsh reality. this one shows about how life can be cruel, sweet or difficult. this can also mean that we need to open our eyes. not everything in our life is fair and truthful and this is a beautiful representation of this. this is a beautifully truthful art, which represents our human nature of trying to open other`s eyes so they won`t get hurt in the long run. this gives everyone a good realization of what life can bring us.