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I'm standing in the middle of nowhere
Such a scary place to be
Standing in the middle of nowhere
And there's really nothing here to see
Everything inside is screaming
Go and set your mama free
But I'm young and not strong so all that's left to do
Is scream...


Mama I'm coming home
And I'm gonna try my best
Never to let you go
To the deep, long rest
And sorry if I let go
On accident
But I won't be alone
'cause if you go
I'll put myself to rest.

Sitting by your bed for hours
I'm too scared to walk away
Sitting by your bed fro hours
Maybe that'll turn to days
And mama, I don't really care it
Goodbye, is all you say
'cause at least it's your voice..


But I was walking home
Mama I was all alone
And I ran without looking both ways
Red inside the street still shines
'cause i didn't run in time
Sorry mama, what was I thinking?

Mama, I can't come home
Sorry I tried my best...
Never to let you go
To the deep long rest
And sorry, Ma, I let go,
On accident...
Hard to think I'm alone
So I tried to show..
That I would put myself to rest.
Something I wrote way back when I was seven or eight, I think. It's so old, but I love it <3
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TigerDemon12 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You have/had a very... dark mind O_O
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Sauny Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're really talented! Especially if you write like this at eight! It's a lovely poem and very moving.
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ShadowLiepard Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
You're talented!
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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dam girl! You must have pure A's in English. :D
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nope XD
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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah that's what I thought you would say. X3 I love drawing but I don't get A's in art class. :3
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh that is so sad and moving
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
If I was able to write like this when I was 7, I'd be filthy rich by now.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha! I wish I was rich! But, money doesn't matter, writing is good enough for me :)
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
I see.
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