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Spiders hang from threads made of shadows.
Blood dripping from his tongue,
Silence flooding the sky.
He’s pouring salt along open wounds,
Bandaging them with dust,
Disinfecting with poison.
Black roses on a coffin
For a small little girl
In a pale pink dress
And cuts along her
Fingertips.

Frozen clocks begin to move
Faster
Faster
Faster.

Done.

The sun has risen,
Early morning light
Shining brightly in the sky.

He walks to the graveyard,
Setting white daisies on
The little girl’s
Grave.

Days go by,
And he sits there.
Waiting.
Tearing petals off the flowers,
One
By
One
By
One.

And a butterfly lands on one daisy.
So gently,
So elegantly,
So sweetly,
So innocently.

He crawls on his hands and knees,
Holes in his clothes,
Dirt on his fingers.
He tickles the butterfly
And treasures it until it dies.

For the best thing to do
Is rip off the wings of a butterfly…
And sew them onto dead little girls.
A poem i wrote... really fast XD Basically this psychotic guy kills a little girl, then appears at her funeral and grave, and then goes onto the next thing to kill.
... I have such a happy mind :)

Hahaha.
Check out my facebook! www.facebook.com/pages/Mikki-M... Go LIKE for more poetry and stuff :)


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RachelKay30 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
When I first read this, I thought the 'he' was someone in the girl's mind. Like, her depression side. If that makes sense. I've been reading too much poetry. 

But I really enjoyed this! :D
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FallenFromGrace74 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Student General Artist
May I draw a peice to this?
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Go ahead :)
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FallenFromGrace74 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconflailingplz: Thankyou
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IAmTheVeryBadArtist Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:saddestthingintheworld Sad Woot Plz crying emote Emote 1: Happy Sad Sad Emoticon No more crying 

Why so sad,
This psycho isn't all bad,
Though just a tad, 
He is a creepy lad...
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Asterlia Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student General Artist
:clap:
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DrayWolf Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant
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Yoru-Sasayaki Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013   General Artist
I have no words, but I love it. :heart:
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kinkyDivers Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Wow Love it 
Imagry is so vivid
CURSE YOU!
 
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Rineewolf1234 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, how.... well... um... its hard to explain but, I love this, I really do... your very talented.....
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carbonatedgirl Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so good I might ask your permission to write a short story or novel about it! If I can.....gave me chills.....
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :) I don't really want anyone writing a book on it for me though, since it's an original idea... But i'm flattered :3
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Sad, dark and well creepy, well written poem
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
SERIOUSLY CREEPY MUCH!!!!
But also very cool and well written!!!:D
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PupPatterson Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
woah...really good. I especially liked this stanza

'Days go by,
And he sits there.
Waiting.
Tearing petals off the flowers,
One
By
One
By
One.'

It helped the poem achieve its eerie beauty! :)
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SamiKitty14 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
kind of devious, but in a good way. Beautifully written, great job! ^-^
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Unabiding Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Idk why but this poem reminds me of the poem The Raven buy Edgar Alllan Poe. This poem is awesome.. A tad frightening... But awesome :)
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Skydoodles Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
Awesome! Sent chills down my spine :iconiloveitplz:
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omeow02 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh yes, so very happy
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I feel sorry for the butterfly. But I guess it was a necessary sacrifice. Great poem, sad but with a little bit of hope in the end.
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debaterarcherwriter Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Professional Writer
Woah.. I wish I had this amount of skill with my poetry.
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MarioGamer96 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student Writer
This was cool
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MiracleChrome Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I get so happy when i see your journals in my messages :D
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VincentRavenYaoi Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh my god... I love this so fucking much!!!! Sad, dark, creepy poetry is the best. *Two thumbs up*
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AngelAxexinf Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Definitely not conventional. I like it!
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Silver-cLaw Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Really cool imagery going on in this. It's definitely dark, and a bit on the disturbing side, but I like it :D
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cosartmic Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I enjoyed it!
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Puppyeyes427 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O.O That was a bit... Something... >U> But I liked it.
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NatalyaKayy Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah SUCH a happy mind I am sure! Haha, kidding, I like it:3
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TalonTali Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
That was ratger dark and creepy, but I really liked it.
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