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Everyone leaves you.
Everyone gives up.
Everyone stops loving you, and stops believing in you, and stops caring about you.
Everyone will say something to hurt you.
Everyone will eventually agree with you when you say “I feel worthless”.
And everyone will eventually say something about you.
And everyone will hurt you intentionally.
Everyone leaves you.
And everyone gives up.

But one person, one special person
Will never leave you.
Will never give up on you.
Will never stop loving you, and never stop believing in you, and never stop caring about you.
Never say anything to hurt you.
Never let you say “I feel worthless”, because with them, you won’t.
Never say or listen to anything bad about you.
And never hurt you.
Never leave you.
And never
Give
Up.
This one is really lame hahaha XD But oh well XD
It's so sweet and lovely :3 and lovey dovey mua mua mua.
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:iconleonardogirl4eve:
There's time where I think the I'm worthless and most of the time I am.
Wonderful poem.
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Izabella2016 Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for this. To me, it feels so true...But I'm not sure if I found that one special person yet. This is just so...gah, I have no words to describe ;-; Good job.
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:iconbubblymaddy:
This was very nice and lovely

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:iconeldenina:
Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down.

When I read this, what I see it's a positive message. Not at all. I see we shouldn't trust in ANYONE. This applies to the "special one too" - I mean, if everyone will disappoint me, how can I know this is my prince charming and will not eventually do it too?

I disagree. Sometimes I feel little, with no friends, at least, no friends with whom I can be every day, every week, not even every month.
But then I remember it's NOT true.

I have a lot of people who love me.
A lot of people who disappoint me but try not not, because nobody's perfect.
A lot of people who make me happy, not always, but a lot of time. Or little time. But during the rest they're not properly hating me. They still love me, even if they're not my soulmates.

I have friends.
A lot of friends.
Not the kind of friends I tell secrets, but friends who may bring sunshine to my day.
People I don't know, that may make a little difference.
God.

This isn't only hope. This is true.
And the little things "little" people do DO make a difference. If it wasn't for that, the whole world would be depressed.

If we don't trust anyone, we won't have a special one.
Because there's a lot of good people out there, and we just have to notice the difference they make. Because if you trust them, all of them will never leave you.
Will never give up on you.
Will never stop believing in you, and never stop caring about you.
Never let you say "I feel worthless".
Never say anything bad about you.

They are there. And they already do it, even if you don't notice.

That's why I disagree with your poem.
This is how humans can be happy.
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LaughingMusicalNote Aug 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is lovely btw! ^^
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LaughingMusicalNote Aug 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
The sad thing about that is that you're never fully sure if you have that person or not until you die.
You may think you do, but there is always the possibility it's not who you are thinking of.
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i have a person i do that for, sometimes i dont even think she knows it.
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mack0312 Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have that person :3
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FennecFoxee Jul 3, 2013  Professional Writer
I forgot to put a comment on this when I faved it, so here it is.

I really like your poetry. It's really well done and a lot of it is what I feel most of the time. And in response to this poem, my boyfriend is my one special person. Once again, this is exactly how I feel. Great job.
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Fanwfire Jul 3, 2013  Student Writer
Well done! I am this person, for a friend. Unfortunately, I'm not appreciated, thrown to the side waiting until it all comes crashing down on her before I am allowed to come and pick up the pieces for my best friend, my sister.

None the less, I enjoyed this thoroughly and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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