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Everyone leaves you.
Everyone gives up.
Everyone stops loving you, and stops believing in you, and stops caring about you.
Everyone will say something to hurt you.
Everyone will eventually agree with you when you say “I feel worthless”.
And everyone will eventually say something about you.
And everyone will hurt you intentionally.
Everyone leaves you.
And everyone gives up.

But one person, one special person
Will never leave you.
Will never give up on you.
Will never stop loving you, and never stop believing in you, and never stop caring about you.
Never say anything to hurt you.
Never let you say “I feel worthless”, because with them, you won’t.
Never say or listen to anything bad about you.
And never hurt you.
Never leave you.
And never
Give
Up.
This one is really lame hahaha XD But oh well XD
It's so sweet and lovely :3 and lovey dovey mua mua mua.
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:iconelanasara1101:
This is beautiful and brought tears to my eyes. I thought I had found my one special person... He left me and I most certainly feel worthless. But I have tried to make him feel special and loved so I hope he'll see that one day and come back to me...
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Leonardogirl4eve Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
There's time where I think the I'm worthless and most of the time I am.
Wonderful poem.
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Izabella2016 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for this. To me, it feels so true...But I'm not sure if I found that one special person yet. This is just so...gah, I have no words to describe ;-; Good job.
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bubblymaddy Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
This was very nice and lovely

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:iconeldenina:
Eldenina Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down.

When I read this, what I see it's a positive message. Not at all. I see we shouldn't trust in ANYONE. This applies to the "special one too" - I mean, if everyone will disappoint me, how can I know this is my prince charming and will not eventually do it too?

I disagree. Sometimes I feel little, with no friends, at least, no friends with whom I can be every day, every week, not even every month.
But then I remember it's NOT true.

I have a lot of people who love me.
A lot of people who disappoint me but try not not, because nobody's perfect.
A lot of people who make me happy, not always, but a lot of time. Or little time. But during the rest they're not properly hating me. They still love me, even if they're not my soulmates.

I have friends.
A lot of friends.
Not the kind of friends I tell secrets, but friends who may bring sunshine to my day.
People I don't know, that may make a little difference.
God.

This isn't only hope. This is true.
And the little things "little" people do DO make a difference. If it wasn't for that, the whole world would be depressed.

If we don't trust anyone, we won't have a special one.
Because there's a lot of good people out there, and we just have to notice the difference they make. Because if you trust them, all of them will never leave you.
Will never give up on you.
Will never stop believing in you, and never stop caring about you.
Never let you say "I feel worthless".
Never say anything bad about you.

They are there. And they already do it, even if you don't notice.

That's why I disagree with your poem.
This is how humans can be happy.
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LaughingMusicalNote Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is lovely btw! ^^
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LaughingMusicalNote Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
The sad thing about that is that you're never fully sure if you have that person or not until you die.
You may think you do, but there is always the possibility it's not who you are thinking of.
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Shadow534 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
i have a person i do that for, sometimes i dont even think she knows it.
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mack0312 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have that person :3
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FennecFoxee Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Professional Writer
I forgot to put a comment on this when I faved it, so here it is.

I really like your poetry. It's really well done and a lot of it is what I feel most of the time. And in response to this poem, my boyfriend is my one special person. Once again, this is exactly how I feel. Great job.
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Fanwfire Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student Writer
Well done! I am this person, for a friend. Unfortunately, I'm not appreciated, thrown to the side waiting until it all comes crashing down on her before I am allowed to come and pick up the pieces for my best friend, my sister.

None the less, I enjoyed this thoroughly and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Arden-Crystal Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Writer
If I have this person, I have yet to meet them.

I've gone though the deep caves of Depression, made it out of the awful twilight zone forest of Loneliness, but I have yet to return from the evil horror land I call Unwantedness.

What if it doesn't get better?
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devilla666 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
That one made me cry a bit. I used to believe that myself but history has repeated itself for the last time. If wear your heart on your sleeve, a psychopath will see it a mile away.
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Lucifargundam Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for sharing!
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:iconfantasyfan123:
fantasyfan123 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I read this, and I think of Jesus, my one special person. :)
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Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awesome
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QuantumInnovator Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
To me, Jesus Christ is that "one special person."

Thanks for writing this.
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FroggyRocki Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Filmographer
^
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:iconhnasah:
hnasah Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
all bound with the fear of being lonely.
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agitodemongirl Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
This reminds me of me and my best friend. I caught her trying to kill herself and I saved her, she said she felt alone and all it took was for me to listen to her. I love the message behind this poem
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dude-im-alive Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013   Writer
I think you would be good at making people feel better :)
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roup14 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013   Digital Artist
hi MikkiMarie.......I read your most of written poems and honestly I liked all of them very much.
all words touched my heart deeply . your poem " I Am" .....I read it many times. you written it what I felt a lot of times .
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ohh thank you <3
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:iconroup14:
roup14 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013   Digital Artist
you're most welcome !
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NoSunLeft Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love it
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:iconnoranian:
NORANIAN Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice true words.😘
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MajorAwesomeness Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
SO INSPERATIONAL!!!
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racerman56 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
The one special person is there waiting to be found by their special one. This isn't lame at all it is the truth
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Itachifan-girl Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is really beautiful Mikki, great job on it
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R0dy98 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOOL am never gonna find that person x_x !
BUT UR POEM IS GREAT :D :D ;)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ME NEITHER! :D HIGH FIVE!
Thank you <3
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R0dy98 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lool HIGH FIVE :)
and you are welcomee :D
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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There realy is a special person out there, always. You just have to find them. Nice. X3
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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BlackSilhoutte Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's wonderful....

by the way, that one special person is yourself..
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O_O that's intense...
Thanks :)
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BlackSilhoutte Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you by the way..
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IzMyOmNomz Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around
And desert you.

Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie
And hurt you.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
... I will go cry now.
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:iconizmyomnomz:
IzMyOmNomz Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heheheh...
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I've been looking for that person. For a long, long time... And I only find stupid excuses for human beings.
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Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
eventually youll find the one.. as soon as u let your guard down and give up then that someon will come
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I already gave up, long ago. But I'll never let my guard down. Not on this cruel, stupid and crazy world.
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:iconmelodygirl74:
Melodygirl74 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hmm
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry :(
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Don't be. I can endure this crappy life.
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lw8453 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
I love this <3
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks Lollipop <3
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lw8453 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
you welcome hanns <3
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FluffyBakura1 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Oh wow i really like this .O.
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