Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login


Stars made of nightmares and skies made of fears
Hearts made of glass and a home built of tears
Cries made of silence and words made of knives
Dreams of the struggle to simply survive
Souls made of paper and minds made of flames
She is a piece of their loveliest game
No longer can she feel more than disgust
Even a rainbow does turn into dust…
go here [link] for the poem on my other account, which has the link to the original photo :)

comments?
Add a Comment:
 
:iconbluestorm548:
bluestorm548 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Were you sad when you rote this?
Reply
:iconghieartwork:
ghieartwork Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
love it :salute:
its official... i am your watcher now ^^
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thanks :3
Reply
:iconmissituk:
missituk Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Beautiful work! Love the image of "souls made of paper and minds made of flames."
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! <3
Reply
:iconkinglorshi:
Kinglorshi Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
This is actually quite interesting, although to me feels a lot like a collection of words with little purpose. It's also unrelentingly cynical sounding too, which I personally wouldn't mind were it more subtle.
I'm sure if I analyze it more I'll get more from it, as always.
Reply
:iconaskfairytaleprincess:
You can make a song outta this ^.^ They would be good lyrics if you have the right beat, you know?
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a ton! :)
Reply
:iconaskfairytaleprincess:
No problem~
Reply
:iconnaomi160:
naomi160 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
As promised I looked up into your gallery and this is something I like. I think I like the most 'Hearts made of glass'. It's a very touching phase. Whole poem is very touching and it was a pleasure to read it.
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very very much <3
Reply
:icon30angel100:
30angel100 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so amazing...I'm usually don't like poetry, but this is an exception.
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh dear :blush: thanks :)
Reply
:icon30angel100:
30angel100 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks? I should thank you for being such an amazing poet. So thanks. Thanks very much.
Reply
:iconpingelot:
pingelot Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I LOVE THIS ONE <3
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thank you ^.^
Reply
:iconpingelot:
pingelot Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
you're welcome :hug:
Reply
:iconblack-kat9:
BlacK-Kat9 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That last line was epic :D
I was blown away.
Reply
:iconevettejo:
evettejo Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Loved this the first time I read it, and I still love it. <3
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thaaaaaanks bruh!
Reply
:iconlynnrunstedler:
LynnRunstedler Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful. Maybe u will check out some of my stuff? :)
Reply
:icongrimjfoot:
grimjfoot Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
I like very much this colourful image!
Reply
:iconstraangely2:
straangely2 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
lovely!
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you C:
Reply
:iconstraangely2:
straangely2 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
welcome!
Reply
:iconpaintedxdark:
PaintedxDark Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful!
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a bunch!
Reply
:iconthenicecommenter:
TheNiceCommenter Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
AKA Cocaine
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
O_o sure. XD
Reply
:iconjust-me143:
Just-Me143 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful.
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
Reply
:iconwhitenoise77:
whitenoise77 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student General Artist
i love pastels!! n i love this picture the colors look so perfect!
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The picture is not mine, just a warning. but thank you very much!
Reply
:iconthorntails:
Thorntails Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
This.... This is beautiful. ;3;
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thank you :3
Reply
:iconthorntails:
Thorntails Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
;3;
Reply
:icongossamier:
Gossamier Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
that is so cool!!!!!!!!!
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!!!
Reply
:icon19mmitschke:
19mmitschke Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Awesome!! It's really pretty!
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
Reply
:icon19mmitschke:
19mmitschke Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
your so very welcome!!!:) i love it!!:)
Reply
:iconilikechocolates:
Ilikechocolates Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
story of my life...I love this!!!
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thank you :)
Reply
:iconilikechocolates:
Ilikechocolates Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
Reply
:iconglitter-x-sparkle:
glitter-x-sparkle Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Beautiful poem and picture.
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^.^
Reply
:iconlaritaleyoupi:
laritaleyoupi Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i really like the picture that you put ! beautifull colors !!!!!!!
Reply
:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a bunch!
Reply
:iconlaritaleyoupi:
laritaleyoupi Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you welcome !
Reply
:iconrelixala:
Relixala Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
I think I favorited this poem when it was on your other account XD
So forgive me if I decide not to favorite this again, but I would like to reiterate that it's very well written :)
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×

:iconmikkimarie: More from MikkiMarie


Featured in Collections

poems by 16woodsequ

Literature and Poetry by ManiacalFreak


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
November 29, 2012
File Size
478 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
4,974
Favourites
811 (who?)
Comments
89
×