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some words by k-i-w-i-t-u-r-t-l-e


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Stars made of nightmares and skies made of fears
Hearts made of glass and a home built of tears
Cries made of silence and words made of knives
Dreams of the struggle to simply survive
Souls made of paper and minds made of flames
She is a piece of their loveliest game
No longer can she feel more than disgust
Even a rainbow does turn into dustů
go here [link] for the poem on my other account, which has the link to the original photo :)

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bluestorm548 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Were you sad when you rote this?
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ghieartwork Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
love it :salute:
its official... i am your watcher now ^^
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thanks :3
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Lil-Muse Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Beautiful work! Love the image of "souls made of paper and minds made of flames."
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! <3
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Kinglorshi Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
This is actually quite interesting, although to me feels a lot like a collection of words with little purpose. It's also unrelentingly cynical sounding too, which I personally wouldn't mind were it more subtle.
I'm sure if I analyze it more I'll get more from it, as always.
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You can make a song outta this ^.^ They would be good lyrics if you have the right beat, you know?
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a ton! :)
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No problem~
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naomi160 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
As promised I looked up into your gallery and this is something I like. I think I like the most 'Hearts made of glass'. It's a very touching phase. Whole poem is very touching and it was a pleasure to read it.
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