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The Reason I Love YouThe reason I love you,
Now let me see....
Shall I compare you to a tree?
Your awesome and lovely
And with everyone you blend in naturally
Or, maybe that's not right....
How about the color white?
Because your spirits just as light
That shines into my deep dark life
And keeps me away from that horrid knife
Or maybe you're more than the sea
Calming and sweet to me
You roll on endlessly
Your love expands as far as the eye can see
Or maybe it's the sun
Faithful, to the one who your heart has won
Keeping me happy, through all the sadness
Tearing away my agonizing madness
Or, maybe you're just you, that's good too
Because none o
The KnifeDay without you are bleak
Being without you has left me weak
So, the days pass slow
For I have nowhere to go
I sit, waiting for you to get back
Every time I move, I fall like potatoes in a sack
I'm depressed, I'm weakened
My life has bleakened
I need you in my life
Or there's nothing left, but the knife
With This RingWould you spend eternity,
Every second, with me?
Or would you decline?
Saying you have other thing on your mind
You'd say, you don't have the time
You'd say, you don't even have a dime
But here, listening as you sing
I think I'll pull out the ring...
Without YouYup
As the waterfall flows from above
So much as constant as my love
This is the way it ought to be
For there's no other way I can see
Without you, is without life
Without you, there's only strife
Without you, there's no rain
Without you, there's only this sickening pain
Without you, there's no joy
So, the only thing that I can do
Is to love you

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Rainbow Dust

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Stars made of nightmares and skies made of fears
Hearts made of glass and a home built of tears
Cries made of silence and words made of knives
Dreams of the struggle to simply survive
Souls made of paper and minds made of flames
She is a piece of their loveliest game
No longer can she feel more than disgust
Even a rainbow does turn into dust…
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go here [link] for the poem on my other account, which has the link to the original photo :)

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Mood: Love ~ghieartwork Apr 8, 2013
love it :salute:
its official... i am your watcher now ^^
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~MikkiMarie Apr 9, 2013
Awww thanks :3
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~Lil-Muse Feb 22, 2013
Beautiful work! Love the image of "souls made of paper and minds made of flames."
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~MikkiMarie Feb 22, 2013
thank you! <3
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~Kinglorshi Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
This is actually quite interesting, although to me feels a lot like a collection of words with little purpose. It's also unrelentingly cynical sounding too, which I personally wouldn't mind were it more subtle.
I'm sure if I analyze it more I'll get more from it, as always.
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~Askfairytaleprincess Feb 21, 2013
You can make a song outta this ^.^ They would be good lyrics if you have the right beat, you know?
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~MikkiMarie Feb 21, 2013
Thanks a ton! :)
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~Askfairytaleprincess Feb 21, 2013
No problem~
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~naomi160 Feb 21, 2013
As promised I looked up into your gallery and this is something I like. I think I like the most 'Hearts made of glass'. It's a very touching phase. Whole poem is very touching and it was a pleasure to read it.
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~MikkiMarie Feb 21, 2013
Thank you very very much <3
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