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I may live inside my own, twisted universe
I may change, sometimes for the worst.
What's normal to me is not normal for you.
Sometimes I just do what I need to do.
Behind a brick wall, I hoped someone would break it
I threw out my heart hoping someone would take it.
But I got tired of hiding and tired of hating
And instead of throwing myself at every guy, I'm waiting.
I'm sick of the person I tried to be
So basically, here I am, I will be me
I'm sick of the hatred, would you not agree?
.. Basically I'm sick of society.
-_-
don't hate
please.
:D
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FriesianKiss Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I favorited this before I even finished reading it, this is truly touching and I love how you captured so many emotions into one poem :) Great job.
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calvincooledge Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
yep

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NorwegianAnime Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
this has such a nice flow, and such a deep meaning. i feel like home with this poem, if you understand. Like if it fits me amd where i am in life
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TracyStromberg Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Bravo! :squee: 
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Depart3d Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Your the normal one it's society that's messed up.
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FallenAngel12199 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Student General Artist
absolutly
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ShiloWilliams Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You seam to be able to reach a lot of others out there who feel the same but have trouble putting their feelings into words. So they keep it all bottled inside, but reading your words in some ways lets them express their feelings to themselves and helps them cope.
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suna-no-hoshi Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Great poems...believe me, I write my own too and I've been reading a lot of them on dA but yours are special because they do not only reflect the truth in a melodic and sometimes ironic way, they also put your mind to the fact. Great job!
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mystifytheworld Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student Writer
geez how can you rhyme so well? whenever I write with rhyming it sounds like 'one fish two fish'
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ninjasinger1 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
omgosh.... just wow...
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