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I may live inside my own, twisted universe
I may change, sometimes for the worst.
What's normal to me is not normal for you.
Sometimes I just do what I need to do.
Behind a brick wall, I hoped someone would break it
I threw out my heart hoping someone would take it.
But I got tired of hiding and tired of hating
And instead of throwing myself at every guy, I'm waiting.
I'm sick of the person I tried to be
So basically, here I am, I will be me
I'm sick of the hatred, would you not agree?
.. Basically I'm sick of society.
-_-
don't hate
please.
:D
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FriesianKiss Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I favorited this before I even finished reading it, this is truly touching and I love how you captured so many emotions into one poem :) Great job.
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calvincooledge Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
yep

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NorwegianAnime Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
this has such a nice flow, and such a deep meaning. i feel like home with this poem, if you understand. Like if it fits me amd where i am in life
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TracyStromberg Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Bravo! :squee: 
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Depart3d Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Your the normal one it's society that's messed up.
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FallenAngel12199 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Student General Artist
absolutly
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ShiloWilliams Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You seam to be able to reach a lot of others out there who feel the same but have trouble putting their feelings into words. So they keep it all bottled inside, but reading your words in some ways lets them express their feelings to themselves and helps them cope.
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suna-no-hoshi Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Great poems...believe me, I write my own too and I've been reading a lot of them on dA but yours are special because they do not only reflect the truth in a melodic and sometimes ironic way, they also put your mind to the fact. Great job!
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mystifytheworld Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student Writer
geez how can you rhyme so well? whenever I write with rhyming it sounds like 'one fish two fish'
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ninjasinger1 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
omgosh.... just wow...
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AmysForest Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing ^_^ quick question, do you naturally rhyme or do you take time to fit together the lines? :heart:
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AmysForest Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I had to say it again how much I love this ahmygod *-* I've read it over and over again. Give me tips to improve? ^_^
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VaingloriousMustache Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Artist
Brilliant
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amberamuawesome Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It kind of scares me how good you are at writing this type of poetry
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LadyFlux Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very well written, it quite emotional!
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CTTDSWehavecookies Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student Artist
I love narrating your poems! :D
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TheUniSquirrel Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Stop being so goddamn awesome! :iconimhappyplz:
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hunterofthedark Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
really good written, I like it very much. =)
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Soooooooo relatable.

You're poems are very awesome.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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:iconunisis-2-in-1-beauty:
Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student General Artist
welcome.
Keep up the good work!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
This is very relatable. Society likes people to be stupid mindless zombies and hates everyone who's not like that.
And I would take your heart and go around (not destroy) the brick wall. Maybe you could help me fix my own heart. Away from this society.
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lw8453 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Super good. again, so much truth!
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks love :)
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overtsexualized Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I feel like if you spoke this it would start off quiet and end with you yelling at your audience, it's full of emotion. Really awesome :)
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vincent325 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
Words cannot express how much I can relate to this. It's an absolutely beautiful piece of writing just so you know. Love it
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Moaheya Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great flow, great content, great power :)
I really love it, and agree wholeheartedly!
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Fb-PHE13 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a great piece! :D I love it!
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Elizaburr Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
my life. your writing is good, i like how you put thought into rhyming. i can see the emotion through the words. you did well. when it comes to the topic,do you mind reading some of my work? its not mandatory but it would be appreciated.
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hybridgothica Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
<3 yes.
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LivingShadow089 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
Very nice
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happyjustbecause Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool, I like it, I sometimes get sick of our societal experiment as well.
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Dickywebster Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
Oh now this really does sound like me :D
Except for the part about guys =P

Nice work :)
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lost-in-her-words Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Beautiful, amazing, I can't even find the words.

I believe this does reflect on the internal feelings of not only myself, but many others.

:3 Keep on writing amazing work
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thanks <3
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lost-in-her-words Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student General Artist
You're very welcome c:
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MarioGamer96 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student Writer
This describes exactly how I feel. Nicely done :)
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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MarioGamer96 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student Writer
Your welcome :)
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Chrissiemusa Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Could work well for a song or slam/spoken poetry. Well done :)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm, never really thought of doing that, haha. thanks!
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SomeLameStuff Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sick of your low self esteem! =P

Do like!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
D: I'M SORRY!
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Jacketgirl Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This would make awesome spoken word poetry. Have you considered making videos of you preforming your poetry?
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :) No i have not, I don't really want to though. It seems to work for others and i love spoken poetry :) It's just, it doesn't excite me at all.
Sorry D:
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Jacketgirl Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, and your welcome.
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Surrender-the-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
this is so amazing! how could i hate this!?!??!?!?!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icongrin--plz: THANK YOU!
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Surrender-the-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
welcomes (:
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MAziMadi1234 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
= D i love it
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